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| Open Poetry #22 |
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A Tear, One Only |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A Tear, One Only The words, they don't come easily, no slipping off the tongue today. The autumn beauty sings its song undone I am, in eyes that say those words one can't, in feelings fold in arms of his, temptations hold. I long to hear the melody that plays upon my spirits rise. Anticipation reaches out, puzzled by a pieced disguise those words one can't, hold back, pretend to softly tread my heart, in blend. I speak not words that eyes slip out a tear, one only, trickles down, expressing deep inside of me what voice alone, today can't sound. Allowed, my feelings, wished to place, my lips to yours, in full embrace. ...unspoken love M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (09-15-2002 08:55 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now this is very tender, true, in ways of tears, one only, blue... very, very nice! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful with a sense of longing. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Truly wonderful piece, and this, exquisite: I speak not words that eyes slip out a tear, one only, trickles down, expressing deep inside of me what voice alone, today can't sound. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
M, this is a gorgeous poem--your heart shines so beautifully...i felt every word of every stanza deep within my own...*sighs* this is just lovely hon. take care. amy "if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :) |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice! Your feelings are clear to see in this poem. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"The words, they don't come easily..."---they may not have come easily, but you definitely put pen to paper very effectively with this poem. Earth Angel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Karilea, thank you for the rhyme response hugss M Nancy, it seems I am always longing..  hugss M vandana thank you for reading hugsss M Virginia, don't tell anyone, but I have no voice of late...so I really can't make a sound *s M Amy, I am so glad you have stopped by...I hope you are well..and I thank you for being such a faithful reader hugsss M Sue, I pretty much am an open book..but to those who know me it is even easier to understand me. Thank you Sue Hugsss M EA, Thank you for your kind response and if I haven't welcomed you before, I do so now. *s M |
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