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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-09-14 09:17 PM



The soft ache of you is gone.
Slipped out of time,

the touch upon
loom of thought
gone into night.

A sweet caress
my mind will miss.

A slow descent
A fade away.

A gentle tug upon satin
of quiet remembrance
so slight
I felt it not.

Not even a feather
of tease upon conscience,

simply a loss of sigh
there in mind.
A space I must now fill.

WhiteRose


Speak to me in whispers,
I'll listen with my heart.

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-14 09:24 PM


Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-14 09:58 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Anne, this is so heartaching, sweet friend, I hope this is not current and every space in your heart is now filled with love and understanding! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Miah
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3 posted 2002-09-14 10:01 PM


Loss is such a heartache.  Very nice poem, I hope your heart heals.
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4 posted 2002-09-14 10:05 PM


Very touching WhiteRose - enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2002-09-14 10:37 PM


WhiteRose

Sometimes the softest sigh becomes the biggest ache. Beautifully expressed!

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