Open Poetry #22 |
Euphonious Reunion |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
There is comfort In redemption Relief in Forgiveness The white hot Winter left my Summer cold your breath failed to Sweeten these bitter days I had become deaf Unable to hear your voice I had become mute Unable to speak your name The damn broke, Salt rolled endlessly Over my tongue I savored despair, Labored despair, & Harbored in the wallow until now... There is comfort In redemption Relief in forgiveness & the brilliance flashes like noonday across this rainbow face ~Tier 9/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Tier, this is beautiful, sad yet filled with hope and rejoicing. Nicely penned. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Gemini... *smiles* ~tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"There is comfort In redemption Relief in forgiveness & the brilliance flashes like noonday across this rainbow face" (big huggsssssss) Oh Tiersdin, this is so sad but wonderful, sweet friend, redemption will always be at stake and is here for all of us to cherish with dear heart! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very nice work....enjoyed very much. DeaDiAmore |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This was lovely, Rainbow face. Hurtingly hopeful, (my cup o' tea) ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Tier, There is nothing I could say that would do this sweet poem justice. So I remain, Speechless |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, DeaDiamore, so kind of you! Wranx, I'll be sure to share another cup with you sometime soon... *smiles* Mikey, thank you for such a beautiful response... ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Don't believe anyone would fail to moved by this, Tiers...we've all, at one or another time, been there - done that! Very well expressed for the masses, my friend. jwesley |
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