Open Poetry #22 |
69 Replies (repost with a wink n giggle) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now I understand the rough papered sand--and too much tough-- wine in sparkles in a glass integrity--how long they last in linger at the bottom dwell and sudden burst of freedom swell-- in the comfort of a group the bubbles rise and form a troup... a ballet formed within a glass-- bursting bubbles--waterdance. *for Tim* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Love the mental pic of this, K. Not quite sure I 'get it' but I sure like the way it reads! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah..dunc, where ya been? just my goofy way of comparing "counting replies" akin to counting the rising bubbles in a glass of champagne...it may LOOK good, but I say just drink the damned champagne lest it go flat! Good to see ya friend! Thanks. OH...and the 69? A thinly veiled reference to "reciprocation" another ! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Your play with words is not always play. LOL |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I hope Tim sees this...you may have to send it to him....he likes mail, I know! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karen, your images as always are stunning. Beautifully written. Loved this one. Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Workin' on my 70th (read) glass. Mike |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
I really enjoyed this, wonderfully put. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
OMG!!! doing what comes natural isn't all so bad is it? smiling here... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
bump, bump btw... the dreaded double bump has some redeeming points also... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all, and Tim? I appreciate your poetry as well as your sense of humor. I thank you most kindly. *quick smooch* (no one saw that! ) |
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