Open Poetry #22 |
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69 Replies (repost with a wink n giggle) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738![]() |
Now I understand the rough papered sand--and too much tough-- wine in sparkles in a glass integrity--how long they last in linger at the bottom dwell and sudden burst of freedom swell-- in the comfort of a group the bubbles rise and form a troup... a ballet formed within a glass-- bursting bubbles--waterdance. *for Tim* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Love the mental pic of this, K. Not quite sure I 'get it' but I sure like the way it reads! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah..dunc, where ya been? just my goofy way of comparing "counting replies" akin to counting the rising bubbles in a glass of champagne...it may LOOK good, but I say just drink the damned champagne lest it go flat! ![]() ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Your play with words is not always play. LOL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I hope Tim sees this...you may have to send it to him....he likes mail, I know! ![]() |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karen, your images as always are stunning. Beautifully written. Loved this one. ![]() Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Workin' on my 70th (read) glass. Mike |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
I really enjoyed this, wonderfully put. ![]() |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
OMG!!! doing what comes natural isn't all so bad is it? smiling here... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
bump, bump btw... the dreaded double bump has some redeeming points also... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all, and Tim? I appreciate your poetry as well as your sense of humor. I thank you most kindly. *quick smooch* (no one saw that! ![]() |
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