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A Different Path |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~By Sue~ There is a special place inside my heart I stored all of the feelings from the start To maybe someday have for later use If I ever heal from all the abuse The unkind words he said really hurt me To believe my ears was so hard you see They hurt me more than anyone knows Those times my ears I always tried to close A different path he did choose to take So a new life for myself I will make A life I think will be so much better Because he and I cannot be together The feelings I once felt for him are gone With him I know I no longer belong 9-8-02 [This message has been edited by SmartChick (09-13-2002 10:13 PM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
No one should put up with abuse! I like the upbeat ending of this one.  Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you for no one deserves to be abused like that and now I am relieved you are free to find what you truly deserve! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very well written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Good girl, guts! And you will feel the freedom....if you have not already.... Hang in there and life will continue to provide you with what you have always desired.... To feel good about you... |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
Hi, I had to respond to this one...if only to say I've been there to. You're not alone and never will be....you are the most important person in your life and the best company...and now you're free to enjoy that ;o) J |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Well Sue, just look at you! New picture, new attitude. I'm so proud of you....hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuzieQ~ Atta girl ! AND from the looks of that new pic .... Looks like you're trolling some new bait~  You're quite a catch yourself, gal !  Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Pin my feelings on the same cushion as all those above me, my friend...more power to you...not that you need anymore when it come to fishin'.... jwesley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Way to go Sue!! Love the new pic too! ~Big hugs from me to you!~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm glad that you left this jerk! You deserve much better. You expressed yourself really well. Best of luck! Most of us go to our grave with our music still inside of us. |
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