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Hopeless Romantic Junior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 27 |
Song 1 The night sky is out The stars are shining bright No friends to call on I'm all alone tonight And the baby cries And the lights go dim Death is knocking on my door Should I let him in The world is caveing in The pressure is on my back The only way to realive the pain Is with a shiny silver blade And the baby cries And the lights go dim Death is knocking on my door Should I let him in Should I let him in I might let him in The birds are singing there songs They always fly around But if I was a bird I'd fly Away And the baby cries And the lights go dim Death is knocking on my door Should I let him in I might let him in I think I'll let him in I just let him in |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Whoa! That's great, I love the repetition and the ending is superb! But conduct him back out, please, he's getting dirt on the carpet.  Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I loved it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado |
That is so sad. (big hugs) It made me cry. I am here if you ever want to talk TradingSpaces19@hotmail.com. thanx for sharing. Andrea |
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Hopeless Romantic Junior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 27 |
Thanks u guys its ur comments that got me writing again. |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Matt I loved it...not sure what made you write it...put good. Love ya, Neala |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hopeless Romantic - I could feel your thoughts reading this, but please show him the door... BC |
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