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" 'Neath Ron's Umbrella "
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" 'Neath Ron's Umbrella " |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
All the ladies and the fellas dance and sing, it's pretty swell-a here 'neath Ron Carnells' umbrella we shall write our poetry. There's so much that I could tell ya, grab your thing and ring the bell-a here 'neath Ron Carnells' umbrella we can go berserk, you see?, Never mind if this rhyme smella swinging in my lonely cell-a here 'neath Ron Carnells' umbrella things like that can't bother me. Smiley faces , round and yella chasing after me, oh well-a, here 'neath Ron Carnells' umbrella thoughts rain down poetically. As the guards sing a-ca-pella spinning 'round until I fell-a here 'neath Ron Carnells' umbrella found my new reality, and it's price-less, I won't sell-a though my mind has turned to jell-a here 'neath Ron Carnells' umbrella is right where I ought to be. [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (09-13-2002 07:44 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Is right where you ought to be, is correct! And This Is Absolutely Priceless! Hugging you! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sunshine, Thank you dear lady, a little whimsy to lighten my load. Doc |
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Sybil Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 73Midwest |
Seems to me your funny bone is in the right place. Enjoyed this very much! Thank you! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Whimsical and priceless. You are some fella! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Crazy Eddie Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 178 |
Always worth reading or writing a little whimsy once in a while, I hope writing it brought as much pleasure as reading it did. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr.Moose1 Are you sure you didn't write this with Toerag? Enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Awww...this is SO funny! Excellent write... Thanks for making me smile tonight! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  LOL! (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, I think this would make a wonderful hip-hop/rap song for Passions, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) You always know how to bring a smile to our faces, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet William, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this poem aint no phony it's cheese and macaroni! |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
I think Ron is one hell of a fella He provided this poetry umbrella paladin |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at walt's reply. I enjoyed your humor and agree, under this umbrella is where I should be. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sybil, Thank you, and, you're welcome. Doc Kethry, Thanks, glad you enjoyed. Doc Crazy Eddie, Thank you, it certainly did. Doc Sy, Thanks. Nope, no Toerags around here, far as I can see. Doc Enchantress, Thank you,knowing I brought a smile or chuckle makes it well worth while. Doc Noah, Thank you my friend. Doc Wayout, Thanks, and quite heavy on the cheese me thinks. Doc Paladin, Thanks, gotta agree with that. Wouldn't have no place to call home without him. Doc Midnitesun, Thank you, a little tribute to the creator once in a while ( gotta stay in his good graces, yanno?) Thanks again to all. Doc |
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