Open Poetry #22 |
Something Fishy about Nan's car |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I thought a car was just a car But boy did I thought wrong About that car, Nan calls her own I really could go writing on It started when she picked me up At the bus stop in Falmouth town My suitcase should go in the trunk But the trunk was shut tight down When I was seated in the front It scared just the hell out of me Closing doors it appears to set off This flying loophole you see You have to put your seatbelt in But I'm just a country girl you see We don't have flying things in cars That scares simple lasses like me When Marti came over to visit She had to go sit in the back Not once she could open the door by herself He held his locks down, lik it was an attack Then Nan would come over, smiling big (she did this every single time) Just pulled the knob with no effort at all Really, I'm telling the truth in this rhyme I bet it's one of them fancy movie cars This car is weird, I am telling you So when she invites you to sit in it Think twice my friends, before you do |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah this is cute Titia! Now remember to buckle up when you get in. Keep the posts and pictures coming. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
We have an expression in Australia "sit down, belt us and hang on". Sounds like it could apply to Nan's car. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... I know this car well Titia! It's a Jaguar with an attitude, rofl ... and I loved that car - tell Nan to bring it up to Ontario for a visit soon. You brought back a ton of wonderful memories for me just now. Matter of fact, I think that door sticks, just so Nan's visitors can giggle and remember when ... like me ... right now. Hugs to you ... glad you are having a wonderful time! /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (09-13-2002 09:42 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A Jaguar with a 'tude. Got that right. Titia, I am so glad you are getting the first class treatment you so deserve! Continue to enjoy the adventure...it's only JUST begun! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Titia, you have captured Nan's car perfectly. I tried so hard to make friends with him, but, it was not to be. If I was in, I couldn't get out and if I was out, I couldn't get in!! Every time!!! "Nan, heeelp..." But he and Nan have an understanding and an agreement and it works for them! Loved this; it's a keeper....Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
He look so nice Muys |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Hah! I don't think I'd like that car! I'll keep my little Malibu, it lets me do my own belting up. (Though it yells at me if I don't, kind of like a steel mother) Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"It scared just the hell out of me Closing doors it appears to set off This flying loophole you see" LOL, that jag is alive. His arms were just wanting to hold you close, for protection. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
LOL This is so cool Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Yes, buckle up then ask the movie star that owns the car for an umbrella drink and not to skip on the cantaloupe block! LOL! THis is delightful, sweet friend, I can't wait to hear of the many more exciting adventures with Marti and Nan from you, Yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Haha You know that movie "Christine" comes to mind..jk..cute and made me laugh..look forward to more Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Very cute! Glad you're having such a great adventure. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nan has never told me to sit in it....she's too busy telling me to sit ON it!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Titia Sounds like you are having a great time...I guess you need a sense of humor to ride with the nanners. Have fun! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
THAT car! You ask Nan about me and THAT dang blastest car! I prefer to think my experience with it was a nightmare but I had the aching muscles to prove every single twisted contortion that car put me through. I finally learned to go in the back, slide through the middle to the front seat about two days before I left! This was not only cute as anything but true too, that car has an attitude like none I have ever seen, but it is a fast little stinker! The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Titia---this is just precious... |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Titia-This was so cute! But, I'm not sure why men always refer to cars as being a she, I think this one definately has the temperment of a he! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww! This is so cute Titia. Enjoy your visit. |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
I don't know how to tell you this, but you guys really shouldn't complain. Everything you've said indicates the car actually LIKED y'all. When the Jag gets mad, it takes two fire trucks to calm her fiery temper. That was just about the time the battery died in the car and the remote wouldn't unlock the doors. Fortunately, her dealer came up with a unique solution … Glad you guys are having fun! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You guys are RUTHLESS... Actually, we're the ones who are Ruthless - Hoot_owl left after a great day... well - sort of a great day (It's not every day I get hit by a little old man driving in a parking lot after all)... But really, folks.. My car and I have an understanding... We do.. And while you're picking on me - don't forget Liz Santos's rendition from last year... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Nan, you and your car have taken quite a ribbing. Do hope you know it is all in good fun. That 'cat' is a prize and they don't make 'em like that anymore. hehehe Hugs to you and Titia, Marti |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I'm so glad you incuded a picture as I thought maybe she had picked you up in a car ready for the destruction derby. I'm glad you're being well taken care of, although I hope there doesn't come a time when you need to get out in an emergency. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
He he, but fun it was. Ron, that car loved us?? LOL Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Titia - I believe that Nan's car is wierd. Me thinks it because she lives near the ocean, and it full of fishes and stuff....... BC |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
ROFL ... just catching up on your responses Titia, and following the links from Ron and Nan. What an adventure, lol. Nan ... Sharon told me you were hit by a car at the store ... I'm sending you an e-mail ... hope you're OK? Best wishes and hugs to you both, /Kit |
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