Open Poetry #22 |
Written Wanderer |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Wriiten Wanderer I am lost in the pages that I write be it day or night I sit and type in this maze of words to win her and whisk her away with quick wit and play giggles return as my poems are read I wonder is she lying in bed She leaves little hints as a possible game But her words do not light my way so I stumble in the dark and pray that I find my way I am not great explorer of grammar nor can I nail pronunciation with a verbal hammer But my need to please this Mysterious angel lifts me to meet my fears so I plunge deep into this literture to win my conquest or at least give it my best just so I can quiet this pounding heart in my chest |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Uplifting...the journey of love is confusing and wonderful...I have always found that the brightest light came from my own heart. ThisDiamond |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
"In your quest I see you are armed well, I see no reason why you should fail gee now I just wish someone would bring forth some poetry to this bleeding heart..need not be perfect its the thought that counts! Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yes, love is always worth fighting for and I wish you all this joy of your own! (big hugggsssss) I can feel your yearning in this, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
in your journey...a candle will help you find your way...look to that light...helen |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Oh My sweet Helen How you brighten my path with your wwonderful words |
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