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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2002-09-13 01:06 PM



Wriiten Wanderer


I am lost in the pages that I write
be it day or night
I sit and type in this maze of words
to win her and whisk her away
with quick wit and play

giggles return as my poems are read
I wonder is she lying in bed
She leaves little hints
as a possible game

But her words do not light my way
so I stumble in the dark and pray
that I find my way

I am not great explorer of grammar
nor can I nail pronunciation with a verbal hammer
But my need to please this Mysterious angel
lifts me to meet my fears
so I plunge deep into this literture to win my conquest or at least give it my best
just so I can quiet this pounding heart in my chest


© Copyright 2002 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-13 01:07 PM


This is awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-09-13 01:29 PM


Uplifting...the journey of love is confusing and wonderful...I have always found that the brightest light came from my own heart.
ThisDiamond

Ceinwyn
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3 posted 2002-09-13 02:33 PM


"In your quest I see you are armed well, I see no reason why you should fail gee now I just wish someone would bring forth some poetry to this bleeding heart..need not be perfect its the thought that counts!

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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4 posted 2002-09-13 02:36 PM




(sigh) Yes, love is always worth fighting for and I wish you all this joy of your own! (big hugggsssss) I can feel your yearning in this, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2002-09-13 02:55 PM


in your journey...a candle will help you find your way...look to that light...helen
Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
6 posted 2002-09-13 04:22 PM


Oh My sweet Helen
How you brighten my path with your wwonderful words

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