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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Chained My soul is chained unto this ground. To fly too high is quite unsound. Adapted to this place of birth My home is here upon this earth. It is the place that gave me life A piece of land that is my fief. To care and hold and clean and tend Until my life is at an end Each piece of ground an Eden’s space To have and hold in loving grace And with each place an apple tree For you to care and oversee So tend this garden with your wife And have ye children and a life. It is foreseen each ring each chime Has meaning in each drop of time Do not covert the apple tree Its fruit has knowledge not for thee. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, you are just wonderful Sy. As I read this ... I felt like I got the warmest heart-hug of inspiration and wisdom. Just lovely ...  Best wishes and heart-hugs to you, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, your words always have so much wisdom and heart in them, and you are one special person who makes Him proud as He is proud of us all, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Each piece of ground an Eden's space To have and hold in loving grace And with each place an apple tree For you to care and oversee So tend this garden with your wife And have ye children and a life. It is foreseen each ring each chime Has meaning in each drop of time Do not covert the apple tree Its fruit has knowledge not for thee. ========================================== If knowledge can be found in an apple... then your poetry is an ORCHARD OF WISDOM... and when you write like this...youre not chained to anything..trust me Stinky..you fly high like a lovely butterfly..now fly my sky so I can sigh(Sy) Meet ya in Eden for tea   *winkiewinkie*   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Sy! ~Morning Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr.T, as you have so beautifully shown us with your worthy words, your soul is not really "chained" to the ground---your soul is "safely secured" with a ribbon of grace, wisdom and love. This is a jewel, as are you!--a timeless piece of writing. ~ smiles across the miles ~ Earth Angel |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Commandments, commandments! Couldn't you just ask once in a while Oy vey! Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, You did get a heart hug and a Noah, Thank you my friend. JM, It's a date. I'll saddle up old Randy. WWRS Enchantress, Hugs back, thank you. Earth Angel, Sweet comment, thank you. Keth, You can but don't expect an answer. LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, So glad to have this tea, I missed you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It all seems so simple when YOU say it, sy...but? Sometimes I feel like I am in a bountiful orchard--chained to a lemon tree!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! I was chained once, but that's a different story Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, You are blessed with a terrific sense of humor. LOL Interloper Thanks for the wonderful. |
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