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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2002-09-13 02:25 AM

In the flow of eve’s glow,
I sit here in solitude.
Breathing in,
breathing out,
silently, yet forcefully.
Thoughts of you keep
circling ‘round my heart,
fencing me in.
Not one for being captured,
tonight I willing accept
Love’s enclosure.
I am your captive,
imprisoned in a cell
in which only you hold the key.
Unlock me, please.
For I do not have the strength
to survive unless I am free
of all constraints,
all restraints,
all the rules and controls.
The game of love too often demands
Submission.
And while I say to you now
I may yet willingly submit,
part of me wishes to stay
close to an open door.
So I beg of you,
unlock the door,
if you really love me.
I will not leave,
if you set me free.

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-09-13 02:40 AM

Kacy,
Now pray tell who holds that key?

I learned this lesson in my 20's and it was freeing indeed. Good write, as usual. Peace.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-09-13 02:44 AM

I'm not a kiss and tell kind of gal.
But I'm glad you learned your lesson, bro.
(And I think Nancy still has the key to your cell.)

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-13-2002 02:50 AM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2002-09-13 03:05 AM

Kacy,
You're pretty good at pop quizzes! Excellent answer, you passed the test. Don't know of any cells here, just love dens.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

bbent
Senior Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 521
Alaska

4 posted 2002-09-13 03:06 AM

Reminds me of Neal Youngs"Love is a rose"...lose your love when you say the word mine.Shine on Colorados newest fire on the mountain and thanks again for another fine write.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

5 posted 2002-09-13 04:54 AM

Midnitesun...Really good. I really liked the lines...

Unlock me, please.
For I do not have the strength
to survive unless I am free
of all constraints,
all restraints,
all the rules and controls.

For love to survive it must be free...Paul

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-09-13 10:55 AM

Thanks, Ray. Neil is cool. Hey, I like that "fire on the mountain" bit.

Paul, glad you liked that, it is true, isn't it?

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-09-13 04:29 PM

(smiles) Wow, I too have heard that Neil Young number, I listen to 97.3 FM KBCO here by the way, they play much Neil Young on that rock station and other classic and modern rock! (big hugggssssss) This is a powerfully bittersweet poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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