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Musing Me? |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
{the first and last I shall ever write of it's kind} Flatter not As intended My meaning a study in futility Arsenal built on one opinion A waste of such ability... Musing me? A whispered dare Careless remark A scathing report Whispered in the dark Thoughtlessly, you then embark On this journey, musing me? Flatter do With scrutiny My every word Importantly Read, rated, Good or hated? Regardless, You are musing me Ignorance, Is bliss in flight As your opinions, Come to night Thrown outside to Matter not & like your face, Is soon forgot The last to ever leave these tips The last of you through parted lips Leaf through my pages, deeply sip Thank you for a-musing me... ~Tier 9/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (09-12-2002 11:53 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Isn't that the truth, flattery will get you no where, even though it works temporarily! You said it so well, kinda like saying, "bite me my muse" lol~  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is good Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at your amusing musing. Flattery will get you somewhere...eventually. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ignorance, Is bliss in flight As your opinions, Come to night Thrown outside to Matter not & like your face, Is soon forgot love these lines....and the poem. Very nicely done my friend..very nice indeed |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Yes, I agree so much, I feel flattery may work at some chances but eventually you only flatter yourself and become flattened! (big hugggssssss) This is powerful wonderful writing, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thanks everyone, it's interesting to read your take on this work (which in my opinion sucks terribly!) I had a totally different thought in writing it. I'd experienced being the muse of someone on another site that I belong to and it seemed as if this person read everything I'd contributed and penned their negative poems accordingly. That's also why I'd written that I would never write such a poem ever again because then I'd be no better than him/her. Thank you all for your kind comments! *hugs* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You're welcome. (okay, that was my response before I read yr response, Tier)So, thank you, instead. Mikey |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
The unwanted muse perhaps? If only if it were so true. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Mikey! You should know better! *hugs* Romeo, Romeo, so nice of you to say so-e-o... *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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