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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-12 11:28 PM



It is a soft weave of lace
aged with time and love.

Grace of many polished table
as stories unfold around.

It was under
the candle burn of sorrow
as Mom walked out the door.

When words said in haste
left a bitter taste
as Dad in pain
put the blame
within lap of child
who a bit too wild
was the cause of all
his hurt.

It was there, passed down
upon floor of cottage
amid ruin of dream
as love walked out.

It was there to dry a tear
when infant so small
birthed with love
conceived out of time
was given as gift to another.

It was left behind
as escape from darkness
came for the delicate
flower
and remained
until return.

It sits now upon loneliness
worn more so, tattered.

A soft weave of lace
that brings me comfort
with its fray of edge.

WhiteRose


Speak to me in whispers,
I'll listen with my heart.




[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-13-2002 08:02 PM).]

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EarthenSoul
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since 2002-05-30
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1 posted 2002-09-12 11:31 PM


I'm stunned.  This is truly a tragic beauty.
BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-09-12 11:37 PM


There is so much introspection in this poem of yours.  Made me reflect on life and the individual turns it takes.  You've laced your words so lovingly throughout.

Nicely done WhiteRose~

  

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-12 11:38 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, this is so heartaching, I can feel the tears of the mother and child in this, my heart goes out to all who face similar experiences, God Bless your golden heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-12-2002 11:39 PM).]

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
4 posted 2002-09-14 12:37 PM


EarthenSoul, thank you for your kind response.

BluesSerenade, Sometimes introspection hurts, but it is a necessary exercise. Thank you for your response.

Noah, Thank you dear friend. As always you touch me with your reply.

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