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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-12 01:49 PM



Cotton Thoughts


you unravel
threads of me
and weave me
into dreams
traveling sweetest
cotton thoughts
to trace the cords
of my seams
you wind the floss
of a heart
gathering the strings
of my lace
embroider a soul
to a moment
spun in
a state of grace

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
EarthenSoul
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1 posted 2002-09-12 02:06 PM


Everytime I read you
I gain more and more respect
And of all the words
I've read of yours
These.....I like best!

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-09-12 02:33 PM


Beautiful words

Cold hands means a warm heart

Thomas119gold
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3 posted 2002-09-12 04:57 PM


Wait one cotton picking minute
Hehehehehehe
I like It I like It
Not as much as satin but it drys nice
Rogue wears briefs
Thomas wears boxers
We all are buttnaked under our clothes though

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-09-12 05:10 PM


Helen,  awesome!  You sit back, watch,
reflect and then all of a sudden, Wham!
Hit us with another beauty...

Thanx for this one,  it is a beaut. of a
poem...

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2002-09-12 06:40 PM


OneSlickLady~
You ARE the fabric of beautiful thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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6 posted 2002-09-12 06:42 PM


ah... I love the feel of cotton... you have done well here... I enjoyed!
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just out of reach
7 posted 2002-09-12 07:35 PM


Oh, Helen, this one gave me chills - so wonderful you are with words!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-09-12 07:57 PM


Helen,
This is an excellent write.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2002-09-12 08:10 PM


Helen...Amazingly beautiful...
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Paul Wilson
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10 posted 2002-09-12 09:00 PM


Helen...Really enjoyed.Your words flow so smooth...Paul
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11 posted 2002-09-12 09:16 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love this, may you always weave happy memories of thread and lave together, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

VAS
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12 posted 2002-09-13 12:52 PM


What a lovely way to feel about someone and what a lovely someone to inspire such a way to feel.

gently, tenderly woven

a piece I certainly cotton to

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

ecrivan
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13 posted 2002-09-13 01:22 AM


beautifully textured weave here..bravo


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