Open Poetry #22 |
Cotton Thoughts |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Cotton Thoughts you unravel threads of me and weave me into dreams traveling sweetest cotton thoughts to trace the cords of my seams you wind the floss of a heart gathering the strings of my lace embroider a soul to a moment spun in a state of grace I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Everytime I read you I gain more and more respect And of all the words I've read of yours These.....I like best! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful words Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Wait one cotton picking minute Hehehehehehe I like It I like It Not as much as satin but it drys nice Rogue wears briefs Thomas wears boxers We all are buttnaked under our clothes though |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Helen, awesome! You sit back, watch, reflect and then all of a sudden, Wham! Hit us with another beauty... Thanx for this one, it is a beaut. of a poem... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ You ARE the fabric of beautiful thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... I love the feel of cotton... you have done well here... I enjoyed! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, Helen, this one gave me chills - so wonderful you are with words!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Helen, This is an excellent write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Helen...Amazingly beautiful... ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Helen...Really enjoyed.Your words flow so smooth...Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love this, may you always weave happy memories of thread and lave together, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
What a lovely way to feel about someone and what a lovely someone to inspire such a way to feel. gently, tenderly woven a piece I certainly cotton to Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
beautifully textured weave here..bravo |
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