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TriXter
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since 2002-03-20
Posts 112
The One

0 posted 2002-09-11 11:28 PM



A walk in the hall,
a simple glance at youre face,
gaspin for air as you flow with grace,
tangled in arms all around,
callin out for you but you dont hear my sound,
watchin as you fade away,
thinkin ill see you another day,
I tear for you.

youre smile the horizon,
laughter of angels,
perfect purly whites, encased in reosepdal lips,
Bronze skin, blue eyes, hair of the sun
my perfect one, that can never be held
and i tear for you.

watchin as you pass by,
a glance for me, as i glace away
timid, shy or am i not accepting,
maybe the fact that you feel this too,
mistakeing shyness for fear?
but i tear for you.

2 years left before the shadows consume you for good,
till youre face is shaded and ive lost you,
ive had 2 to let you know,
third time round but my heart races,
can i share this beating drum?
of course not, ill continue to watch from three rows back,
only if i wasnt so scared,
ill dream,and wodner,
and continure to tear,
tear for you.

The man of few words...

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Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
1 posted 2002-09-11 11:30 PM


I love the images you have put into this piece Trixter!!

Wonderful write!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-09-12 02:39 PM


Good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

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