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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-09-15 01:08 PM



Love is but that which
stirs the heart, the gut and soul
into a soft mush

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Miah
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1 posted 2002-09-15 01:12 PM


Magnus,

Very beautifully put. Love is wonderful.  thank you for sharing.



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2 posted 2002-09-15 01:16 PM


Magnus - I think it is sort of like a marshmallow soup Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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3 posted 2002-09-15 01:35 PM


Magnus
I think it's like toasting marshmellows.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-09-15 01:43 PM


LOL @ my sister's marshmallow soup!
This is well done Barry...not too mushy...
Just right/write!
~Hugs you tight~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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5 posted 2002-09-15 04:02 PM


I think Mushy belongs to Marsha, doesn't it?

just kidding... few words can say alot.

*s
M

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-09-15 04:42 PM


Barry - yes indeed, it's all that and more...

BC

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7 posted 2002-09-15 05:08 PM


See what a versatile writer you are! When I click on one of your titles, I don't know whether I'm going to moan or cry or croon or swoon!

From one mushpot to another

Linda


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8 posted 2002-09-15 06:13 PM


...so that's why I always squish, squish, slosh, slosh, mushy, mushy... I'm in love!
An all this time I thought it was all  the stuff I have hanging around from too many Thanksgiving dinners....

Good write my friend (and between you and me... although I think I have far more love than I deserve... I still think mines too many... dinners).

jwesley

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9 posted 2002-09-15 06:17 PM


Very well said, Magnus!
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10 posted 2002-09-15 08:57 PM




(smiles) Mmmmmmmm...I too love how Chris put it...marshmallow soup! Yay!!! (big huggssssss) Oh Barry, this is a delightful sweet poem, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2002-09-15 10:44 PM


Magnus...Your words are so true...Paul

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12 posted 2002-09-15 10:59 PM


You got it and so simply put! Yet it took one of your great wisdom to be able to state so clearly and simply.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

CSKpoet
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13 posted 2002-09-16 10:06 AM


So...if you're passionately in love is it toasted marshmallow?...
  you described it well...
love can make ine's brain mush too....LOL
I enjoyed this as I seek out your poetry to enjoy each new poem.....thanks so much Barry
Cher

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Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

WhiteRose
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14 posted 2002-09-16 10:57 AM


Short and sweet and so very true.
Toerag
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15 posted 2002-09-16 11:11 AM


Love Poem

Come to me
do not hesitate
I am not funky

Please by mine
Let our hears entwingle
Like Honeysucker

Jump around me
scuff my boots
Fingerpoke at me

Skippy-toe by
With owl growls
And Fa-la-la's

Love with me
All your grits
As I love you

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