Open Poetry #22 |
What Love Is.... |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love is but that which stirs the heart, the gut and soul into a soft mush |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Magnus, Very beautifully put. Love is wonderful. thank you for sharing. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magnus - I think it is sort of like a marshmallow soup Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus I think it's like toasting marshmellows. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL @ my sister's marshmallow soup! This is well done Barry...not too mushy... Just right/write! ~Hugs you tight~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think Mushy belongs to Marsha, doesn't it? just kidding... few words can say alot. *s M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - yes indeed, it's all that and more... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
See what a versatile writer you are! When I click on one of your titles, I don't know whether I'm going to moan or cry or croon or swoon! From one mushpot to another Linda |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...so that's why I always squish, squish, slosh, slosh, mushy, mushy... I'm in love! An all this time I thought it was all the stuff I have hanging around from too many Thanksgiving dinners.... Good write my friend (and between you and me... although I think I have far more love than I deserve... I still think mines too many... dinners). jwesley |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very well said, Magnus! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Mmmmmmmm...I too love how Chris put it...marshmallow soup! Yay!!! (big huggssssss) Oh Barry, this is a delightful sweet poem, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Magnus...Your words are so true...Paul |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You got it and so simply put! Yet it took one of your great wisdom to be able to state so clearly and simply. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
So...if you're passionately in love is it toasted marshmallow?... you described it well... love can make ine's brain mush too....LOL I enjoyed this as I seek out your poetry to enjoy each new poem.....thanks so much Barry Cher Poetry is: |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Short and sweet and so very true. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Love Poem Come to me do not hesitate I am not funky Please by mine Let our hears entwingle Like Honeysucker Jump around me scuff my boots Fingerpoke at me Skippy-toe by With owl growls And Fa-la-la's Love with me All your grits As I love you |
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