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Step.....Lightly.....And Then...... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Step lightly into the soft of me this place where I reside within the walls of straw and clay surrounded by flickering lights of comfort.. Touch me……again with the words of your lips as fingers find the hidden sighs of words lingering on a tongue thirsting for the taste of your desire. Hold me against the throb of you as trembling hands strum a tune, a symphony. Here…..on the drum of soul, beat to the rhythm of love made of soft and warm breezes as the ragged breath of us collides against the moistness of taste rolling against the cliffs of a moment…. shared with you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YESSSS!! YES!!! OH YES!! Oops...sorry Barry, got carried away there. This is so...ohhh, yes, you know...  I'm going to hold back the sigh until I shut this puter down in a few minutes... Then the whole neighbourhood will hear me! Ha! Wonderfully sensual write m'friend. Oooooh yeeeesssss! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Touch me again with the words of your lips as fingers find the hidden sighs of words lingering on a tongue thirsting for the taste of your desire. ================================== well thats a big ole sigh waiting to happen...lovely romantic images and inspire. Well done poet sir...you'll have the whole place swooning soon.  If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Pleasant dreams Nancy.....I am listening for the sound of .... you know... JM...geeee, OH well....guess that is what is gonna happen....Just the mood of me this evening....didn't realize it was this late though.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, you always bring such passionate magic to these forums, this is a sensually romantic classic, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hello Barry: Always impressed with these spiritual writes of yours. Pure Ecstasy. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hi Kathy....thanx...have you seen my Corel CD....NO?....Neither have I ....darn, darn, darn, I hate Microsoft Works....wish I had Word or Corel....when I type poems... the first letter of every line is always put into Caps.....Is it my ignorance...or am I stuck with that? Help.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I don't cry easily...heaven knows I've been told I have too many walls... but Sir, you've scaled at least one, and the drought may end, here, in Kansas... Magnus...this is a very, very special peace you have shared... thank you for this, and yes, perhaps one of your best pieces...ever... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, You old romantic what are you trying to do to all the girls? Enjoyed |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a beautiful passionate poem!!! Neeraja |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry You melt with this one...tis gorgeous and sincere. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - warm, this is warm... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
My, but I do believe the Sun is shining very brightly this day.....in spite of the spelling error that I see......Perhaps, given your talent, this was intentional with another meaning...Yes. perhaps... Martie....thanx dear one....last night was a night of great emotions....gosh, my sensitivities were coming out....just being me... Neeraja....thanx much....pleased that you enjoyed this... SY....why not? Thanx... BC....turning up the heat of the pen and the heart behind it....thanx... Noah....thanx my friend...loyal to us all.... [This message has been edited by Magnus (08-17-2002 12:01 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's a good thing you allowed my term of word...  otherwise I would have been disappointed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my... this is so very deep and strong |
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