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Of Puppets |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Puppets I dreamed a puppet in a glean Soft pink all told a beauties queen A face that brought my eyes to stare Upon such beauty made so fair. Life size was this gorgeous prize that Altered my heart, watered my eyes And seemed to wait a touch of wand To come to life and to respond I brushed her lips with fingertips Hovered her and kissed her lips. And then I heard the slightest sigh As she opened up those amber eyes And there I fell in love a dream That turned my life into a theme That I would never settle less Until my death I did confess. And so I wait a dream come true And I would ask so wouldn’t you? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Seymour, this is so beautifully hopeful, dreams can come true, so wish upon a star and let yourself be free like Pinocchio from his strings! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton (God Bless America) "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-11-2002 08:06 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've a tad too much zing to be a puppet strung to strings ... the chains of cling could ding the fling of me mothy wings. And no matter how keen ... I'll never be a beauty queen ... I'm a touch too green and mean for that pristine scene of lean. Still I dream and scheme this glean theme just as you ... So this non-queen would ask the king with extreme esteem ... will I do?  *winkiewinkie*   |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bless your ever-loving heart...thank you, Sy.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sy! ~Extra tight hugs today...~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. JM, Will you do? You know that beauty is in the eues of the beholder. And there is non more beautiful than my tinkerbell. WWRS Sunshine, Enchantrass, And extra hugs to you, :squeze: |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yep, I would, in a heart beat!! Your poetry is a prize all by itself. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, My oh my. This is a wonderful work. How you make the girls swoon! So well done and a delight to dream of as well.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Gepetto, won't you come to me, and trace your fingers lovingly? A finger crossing smile, surreal. Gepetto? Only LOVE is real. gawd yer gorgeous. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade, Thank you for the read and reply. Larry C, You serve a mean dream yourself, thank you. Serenity, My dancing gypsy poet. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Most definately what faerie tales are made of..*swoons* methinks I am in love  Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-13-2002 02:25 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy is it true a puppet cannot be blue and from those eyes she cannot cry? if so I'd be on dancing string and make all day your ring a fling |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one makes me smile! Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kristen Thank you for the swoons. Martie, That would be nice. Pilgrimage A smile is good. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You bet your bippie I would....Like the elves standing around Snow White...hoping that she would awake...so stands the puppeteer... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Barry. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sweet Dreams, Sy! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sy,  I would dance upon a string, for you I'd do most anything. These words made my heart go pitter pat, but then again they always does that! I am saving this for my Tori when she gets bigger, this is a classic. I wish you would have drawn the picture to go with this, but then again you did in my mind really - good jobber, you created art through words ~ whooo hooo. The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gemini, Thank you I'll try. Thank you Sharon, you are a star in my night. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very Beautiful....enjoyed very much. DeaDiAmore |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DeaDiAmore, Thank you for the read and comment. |
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