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(the witch....has lost her power...cried)
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Tonight... right now. I'm so alone. If I were blind I'd tap morse code with my cane upon concrete in hopes I chip a bit of me-- and were I deaf? I'd find a drum and press my chest on skins in hum... to dance and oh I might as well be mute... this scream is silent spell. There is no chant. There's no incense. There is no spark. No candle's glimpse of light that lingers shadow'd edge. Tonight? I'm lonely. Tonight? I beg. since I cannot be with you... [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-11-2002 02:53 AM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
HARD hugs from here no, not you..... c'mon let me wipe tears.... love b |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I want to make a graphic that could create the you on me... I wish you were emoticon and visual? not blasphemy... I wish I felt a soft exhale of you falling into sleep... oh-I-wish I could feel you-- and oh-I-wish you could feel me  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
There is no chant. There's no incense. There is no spark. No candle's glimpse of light that lingers shadow'd edge. Tonight? I'm lonely. Tonight? I beg. since I cannot be with you... Perhaps a candle lit sometime with thoughts of you, just you true, no chants no spells though it may feel like hell some time just to find the you inside that we do so adore.  Just a little levity. Not to take away from the words I assure you. A sad and touching poem. I felt your loneliness. Very well done! [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-11-2002 08:16 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If I were blind I'd tap morse code with my cane upon concrete in hopes I chip a bit of me-- and were I deaf? I'd find a drum and press my chest on skins in hum... to dance and oh I might as well be mute... this scream is silent spell. There is no chant. There's no incense. There is no spark. No candle's glimpse of light that lingers shadow'd edge. ================================ ME thinks you havent lost a thing... certainly not the powers of your gifted pen. and? me definatly sees a spark ... (or is that a pretty blue flame)   |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
why is there not a french smilie??? sigh...oh Jan...I'd ask for help...but ooooh.. I LIKE it!!! oh...and...*ahem* I do not need a bottle full of sand...chuckle! (smiling...I wanted to be a writer? and now EVERY FRIGGING DAY IS A BOOK.) You must make sand angels...the right way? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You must make sand angels...the right way? ============================ Let me guess? on me back???? ROFLMAO |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay... you also have my permission to do sand angels the "left way" but? I warn you: This may cause abrasion and serious discomfort. And? could very well ruin the rest of your vacation!!!! [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-11-2002 08:42 AM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sen: -Sand angels- Their eyes of granite did proclaim nothing. 'Twas only sand. Mikey -- voraciously reading yr books |
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