Open Poetry #22 |
Little Earthquakes |
EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
I just want to let you know, You mean a lot to me. You make me happy, you make me smile, And I know you care for me. This friendship brings me so much joy, I don’t know where to start, Nor can I explain this newfound trembling within my heart… It makes me wonder, love, it makes me Ponder truths unknown, Truths such as the reason for this soft Friendship we’ve sown… I don’t care if it goes nowhere, Know you always have me. No label can do justice to the Comfort that you give me… I want to make you happy, I want to be your friend, I want to tell you it’s allright, And love you ‘till the end. I want to gently hold you, and whisper words of love, and live another day knowing that you’re my little dove! Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU [This message has been edited by EagleScorpion (09-10-2002 09:33 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I want to make you happy, I want to be your friend, I want to tell you it’s allright, And love you ‘till the end. I want to gently hold you, and whisper words of love, and live another day knowing that you’re my little dove! A lovely piece, filled with soft feelings. Enjoyed! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very much enjoyed this read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
thanks for the replies guys.. HOW BOUT THAT?!?!?! I'M UP to 900 posts BABY!!!!! WOO HOO!! |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
thanks for the replies guys.. HOW BOUT THAT?!?!?! I'M UP to 900 posts BABY!!!!! WOO HOO!! |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
whoops. (chuckles) |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
A very sweet poem to a friend with, i detect, a hint of more? Annika:- "Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?' |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
friendship is a nice thing to be able to nurture as we follow a ship's wake...nice poem |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is very tender....a wonderful write... Lauren~ I need some distraction |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
One of my utmost soul-devastating cd's... "litte earthquakes" oh yes. Tori... as in, AMOS? smile... "me and a gun" made us sisters... loved your poem and the reference was a kiss of sealing wax. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
yes.. thats where i got the idea for the title... Tori Amos rules! |
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