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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2002-09-10 09:32 PM



I just want to let you know,
You mean a lot to me.
You make me happy, you make me smile,
And I know you care for me.

This friendship brings me so much joy,
I don’t know where to start,
Nor can I explain this newfound
trembling within my heart…

It makes me wonder, love, it makes me
Ponder truths unknown,
Truths such as the reason for this soft
Friendship we’ve sown…

I don’t care if it goes nowhere,
Know you always have me.
No label can do justice to the
Comfort that you give me…

I want to make you happy,
I want to be your friend,
I want to tell you it’s allright,
And love you ‘till the end.

I want to gently hold you,
and whisper words of love,
and live another day knowing
that you’re my little dove!


Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU

[This message has been edited by EagleScorpion (09-10-2002 09:33 PM).]

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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
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1 posted 2002-09-10 09:44 PM


I want to make you happy,
I want to be your friend,
I want to tell you it’s allright,
And love you ‘till the end.

I want to gently hold you,
and whisper words of love,
and live another day knowing
that you’re my little dove!

A lovely piece, filled with soft feelings. Enjoyed!

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-09-10 09:54 PM


Very much enjoyed this read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

EagleScorpion
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3 posted 2002-09-10 10:58 PM


thanks for the replies guys..

HOW BOUT THAT?!?!?!

I'M UP to 900 posts BABY!!!!!

WOO HOO!!


EagleScorpion
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4 posted 2002-09-10 10:58 PM


thanks for the replies guys..

HOW BOUT THAT?!?!?!

I'M UP to 900 posts BABY!!!!!

WOO HOO!!


EagleScorpion
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5 posted 2002-09-10 10:58 PM


whoops. (chuckles)
A. L. Becker
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since 2002-09-06
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6 posted 2002-09-10 11:01 PM


A very sweet poem to a friend with, i detect, a hint of more?
Annika:-

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

ecrivan
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7 posted 2002-09-10 11:51 PM


friendship is a nice thing to be able to nurture as we follow a ship's wake...nice poem


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8 posted 2002-09-11 12:03 PM


this is very tender....a wonderful write...


Lauren~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2002-09-11 03:18 AM


One of my utmost soul-devastating cd's...

"litte earthquakes"

oh yes.

Tori...

as in, AMOS?

smile...

"me and a gun" made us sisters...

loved your poem and the reference was a kiss of sealing wax.

EagleScorpion
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10 posted 2002-09-12 04:56 PM


yes.. thats where i got the idea for the title... Tori Amos rules!
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