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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-09-10 08:17 PM


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Embrace your sexuality
It is our gift from God
Give of yourself, to someone else
In truth, not false facade

Open up your heart with love
And show you really care
Merging bodies, minds, and souls
Are yours to freely share

Creating joy with tender touch
Extends beyond mere sex
It swirls you up the fount of life
As each loving soul connects

Intimacy fuels the passion
To explore the boundless heights
Liberate yourself--let go
Enjoy those love-filled nights

Just be yourself completely
And do not play a part
Bare your inner self and soul
And open up your heart

Giving and receiving
Are each a part of love
Keeping them in balance
Brings bounty from above

The pleasuring of each other
Gives rise to ecstasy
Tides of passion sweep you away
As you drink to capacity

A satisfying union
Leads to mutual release
Filling each with wonder
And soulful inner peace

Conjoined in love and honoring
Two parts will make a whole
As hearts beat together
Uniting flesh and soul

~

© Copyright 2002 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-09-10 08:31 PM


Wow!!!!!!!!
Beautifully sensuous, Linda
~ hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-10 08:34 PM


Madame Chipmunk---why thank you! It seems that chipmunks and angels know how to have a good time too! tehe

Earthy Angel

WhiteRose
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3 posted 2002-09-10 08:37 PM


A satisfying union
Leads to mutual release
Filling each with wonder
And soulful inner peace

Conjoined in love and honoring
Two parts will make a whole
As hearts beat together
Uniting flesh and soul

Linda, what a lovely romantic piece from you. Enjoyed the harmony of souls here. Very nicely done.

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-09-10 08:44 PM


Linda,  you know that you are playing
UNFAIR!!!!!  That title,  what guy, or gal
at PiP is going to pass up reading this
poem with that title...  

BTW...the poem...she is a beaut!  YES it tis, it tis....

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-10 08:48 PM


WhiteRose---I love it when a poet takes the time to write down exerpts of my poem in their reply. It holds great meaning for me. Thank you!

"Romantic"???---now, a remark like that from you, is really a compliment!

Earth Angel

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6 posted 2002-09-10 08:49 PM


This is very well done - enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2002-09-10 08:55 PM


Magnus----hahahaha!!! You know that I'm just a PIPsqueak! I have to get their attention somehow!

BTW--that was a very kind comment you made about my poem.

P.S.---I suppose the sequel to this poem should be----"Making Love, Again!"  teehee

Bye for now! I've got to get back to my research! tee-hee

Earthy Angel



Earth Angel
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8 posted 2002-09-10 08:59 PM


Nightshade---I'm glad you enjoyed it. As you pointed out to me earlier today, the Nightshade is a poisonous plant!!!--and I wouldn't want to get your ire up! hehehe!

Thanx for your reply!

Earth Angel

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-10-2002 09:16 PM).]

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9 posted 2002-09-11 12:11 PM


Wonderful (as in, filled with wonder) writing, Linda.

Mikey

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2002-09-11 12:16 PM


Mikey----thanks for the 'wonderful' reply!

EA

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11 posted 2002-09-11 02:32 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, I love it, and may this beautiful love and passion always bring a glow to your heart, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

(God Bless America)

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2002-09-11 02:41 PM


Mistletoe Angel----"beautifully sensual"---now those are words that describe your poems of love!

~  smiles  ~

Earthy Angel

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13 posted 2002-09-11 02:47 PM


Breathtaking!  
Loved it!

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2002-09-11 02:54 PM


J.K.Michael---Wow! That makes me feel good, that my words elicited a response like that!
Thank you!

Earth Angel

Krawdad
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15 posted 2002-09-11 03:04 PM


Outstanding!
Very well done!
Couldn't have said it better myself, only wish I had written it.
The "freedom" in this is grand!
Thank you.

[This message has been edited by Krawdad (09-11-2002 04:11 PM).]

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2002-09-11 03:14 PM


Krawdad---Well, excuse me a moment while I pick myself up from off of the floor! You blew me right out of my chair with that thunderously wonderful reply!

P.S. You are way too humble! You most assuredly could have written this if you had so desired!

Thank you so much for your kind reply!

Earth Angel

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