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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-09-10 07:03 PM



Moon In Sorrowed Weep
~*Marge Tindal*~

Moon in sorrowed-weep
Turns her face to spill the tears
Praying we won't see~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-09-10 07:08 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart the sad sigh whispers back

fare thee well……….

Now that is as short as I’m ever going to get
I wub you too
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Betty
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2 posted 2002-09-10 09:51 PM


This is short & oh so sweet. I really like it.
Love ya,
Betty

[This message has been edited by Betty (09-10-2002 09:53 PM).]

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-10 10:14 PM


Marge---what an incredibly poignant gem.  Visually, I find that the white font on the blue background, is very effective in creating the tone of this poem. This is so well done!

Earth Angel

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4 posted 2002-09-10 10:15 PM


Beautiful!!

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2002-09-10 10:15 PM


Very beautiful and sweet.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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6 posted 2002-09-11 12:31 PM


Marge:  I can imagine the moon weeping over the events of the past year.  Keeping us company!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2002-09-11 05:28 AM



Marge-
My friend...you just KNOW what this one does
to me, don't you?  Well, if you don't you should.
This just reached in and grabbed a hold of my gut
and just wouldn't let you.  This may be a
short, simple piece, but there is nothing
simple about the way it speaks to me.
So powerful that it actually brought tears to my eyes.
Oh...and by the way...I LOVE IT.
Big HUGS,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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8 posted 2002-09-11 08:55 AM


SIMPLE YET POWERFUL WORDS ...

Hugs, Marti

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-09-16 12:56 PM


MarshaLove~
I know ... I know~

Betts~
Thanks hon~

EarthAngel~
Thanks lots gal~
So effectively displayed was she when this thought came to me ... crested and definitely not showing her face ... and I know the tears were there ... ~

Enchantress~
Thanks sweet lady~

Loner~
I appreciate you~

BettyLou~
Exactly ... and oh what sorrow filled her phase~

Vicky~
My friend ... my friend ....
I know your tears-in-fall~
*hugs* my dear lady~
I love you~
*Hugs*
~*marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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