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Moon In Sorrowed Weep
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Moon In Sorrowed Weep |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Moon In Sorrowed Weep ~*Marge Tindal*~ Moon in sorrowed-weep Turns her face to spill the tears Praying we won't see~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart the sad sigh whispers back fare thee well………. Now that is as short as I’m ever going to get Love and warm stuff as always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is short & oh so sweet. I really like it. Love ya, Betty [This message has been edited by Betty (09-10-2002 09:53 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge---what an incredibly poignant gem. Visually, I find that the white font on the blue background, is very effective in creating the tone of this poem. This is so well done! Earth Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful!! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very beautiful and sweet. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: I can imagine the moon weeping over the events of the past year. Keeping us company! Betty Lou Hebert |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- My friend...you just KNOW what this one does to me, don't you? Well, if you don't you should. This just reached in and grabbed a hold of my gut and just wouldn't let you. This may be a short, simple piece, but there is nothing simple about the way it speaks to me. So powerful that it actually brought tears to my eyes. Oh...and by the way...I LOVE IT.  Big HUGS,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
SIMPLE YET POWERFUL WORDS ... Hugs, Marti |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ I know ... I know~ Betts~ Thanks hon~ EarthAngel~ Thanks lots gal~ So effectively displayed was she when this thought came to me ... crested and definitely not showing her face ... and I know the tears were there ... ~ Enchantress~ Thanks sweet lady~ Loner~ I appreciate you~ BettyLou~ Exactly ... and oh what sorrow filled her phase~ Vicky~ My friend ... my friend .... I know your tears-in-fall~ *hugs* my dear lady~ I love you~ *Hugs* ~*marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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