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A Suitor Waiting
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A Suitor Waiting |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... 
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(she knows who she is) I'm your man, you're my girl, I can't hold your hand. Hear the sighs of a suitor waiting till the time is right. Hear the song... I'm you're man, you're my girl, (but) I can't hold your hand. Time wants patience, my heart wants now, come close, feel my strength (my weakness) Hear my cry... I'm your man, you're my girl, I can't hold your hand. No, no, no, no, No, no, no, no... I'm the suitor waiting. By 'Titus' (Inspired by Usher's 'U Got It Bad') [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (09-07-2002 06:05 AM).] |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Love that song, particularly the guitar solo, is one of the few really soulful songs released for a long time. Good Work Zall |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Ti, this is beautiful. Absolutely beautiful  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Lovely, and yep, you got it bad  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
dang, Ti..you do have it bad..miss reading your words! sorry I haven't been around much lately..meandering through some crud..*hugs* Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Hear my cry"----indeed, I certainly do! Soulfully put together. Earth Angel |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Thank you all. Sincerely, Titus "I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come." |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
"come close, feel my strength (my weakness)" This was my favourite part. I'm liking these recent poems by you, though I hate that they are inspired by pain.  "you don't need one of these to let me inside of you" T.A. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Daniel, I know this song so very well too, sweet friend, and this wonderful inspiring tune you cranked out in inspiration! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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