A command performance by Mushy Marsha . . . A poet's soul . . .

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-09-09 02:35 PM

there are paths of peace
in the soul of a poet
tranquility place
~*~
let me stroll within
you guide with your words of rhyme
beckon with free verse
~*~
not a primrose path
‘tis a safe way well traveled
blazed by each poet
~*~
sharing raw feeling
memories of those times past
sweet recollection
~*~
escorted in thought
we meander with feeling
in a poet’s soul

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (09-09-2002 02:43 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-09 02:36 PM

I loved it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2002-09-09 02:42 PM

A work of art indeed, both subject and wording...

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-09-09 02:57 PM

Very very beautiful...
lyrical, gentle and very calming.
Marsha will love this...
A poet's soul is special indeed.
~Hugs~

Pell
Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 134
Pacific NW

4 posted 2002-09-09 02:58 PM

yeah! I like where this takes me, lovely write

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2002-09-09 03:04 PM

Interloper - dear poet, your words are amazing and this one is library bound. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-09-09 05:31 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is wonderful, I love it, I know Marsha is so lucky to have a caring friend like you as we all are, God less You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2002-09-09 05:36 PM

Bob darling heart I really love this , but of course you know that, you are remarkable perceptive, and this is simply divine. The touch of your words fluttering within the spirit of this, rise from the page to dance in lyrical wonder into the very stuff of my soul. I truly am breathless with delight, truly you write with starlight.

If I could hold the starlight
And wrap it in a cloak of might
I would drape its silvered glow
Around your soul just like so
If within the thought of touch
I could gift you with this much
I would whisper yes to the air
Send it flying away to where
The words stroke across your soul
Rising to fill the aching hole
The possible within the sigh
The wondering of pleasure’s aye
If I could gift this dreamers might
I would unwrap hope’s delight

You know I truly love this, you really are an amazing poet

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-09-09 07:25 PM

What a beautiful description of Marsha...
A wonderful job, Interloper

~ hugs and cheers

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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