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Open Poetry #22

A raibow is born(Haiku)

chitsank
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 88

0 posted 2002-09-09 02:01 AM

Sun's rays fall in love
with rain drops and a seven
hued rainbow is born.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-09-09 08:43 AM

I believe it happens just like that

Very nice.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-09 08:56 AM

"hued rainbow is born"
---I love this line!

Earth Angel

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-09-2002 08:56 AM).]

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-09-09 10:41 AM

1derful

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-09-09 10:45 AM

chitsank
Well done, enjoyed.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2002-09-09 11:16 AM

ROYGBIV!

Sounds like a toast, doesn't it? And I toast you in your expertise of haiku and, what was that other one? Sheesh, being old is the pits, sometimes! Anyway, you know I liked them both!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-09-10 10:40 PM

So that's the way it's done~~

This was just as pretty as the real thing.

Nice~ very...

chitsank
Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 88

7 posted 2002-09-11 02:06 AM

Thanx to u all, for ur words of appreciation.

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