Open Poetry #22 |
I am a tree. |
GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
I am a savannah tree Distilling sunlight In the midst of dreams, In which no tears fall to Ease the ache. Branches reach up As though in surrender, Summoning the storm’s drench to make peace with the drained inside. Dreams overflow; Of puddles are harmony Reflected. Water’s melody is this Earth’s joyful muse. This swaying makes peace With the rhythm of growth. Cycles are me And it shows. I rise, it rains. Drought’s dreaming; Burning fills the Silence. Earth laughs in flowers. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Oh I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Branches reach up As though in surrender, Summoning the storm’s drench to make peace with the drained inside" Your immersion into nature yields beautiful poetry. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
For certain, anything with "tree" in the title will draw me in---and I wasn't disappointed. Earth Angel |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Liked this much. Your "Savannah tree" is a beauty. ~wranx |
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