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Randy's Dragon
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Randy's Dragon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Randy’s Dragon I vie with the lamb this beast that I am. This dragon of soar in heart and in core I roar and I fuss, snort fire and cuss But really a lamb, this beast that I am I fly in the blue, to catch heavens hue Paint on color to, fool my medulla I would to the eye, just a butterfly Living the hours, sniffing the flowers. But I’m repulsive, and quite illusive Really a bumpkin much like a pumpkin But cannot convince the queen or the prince Of my real pretense or my innocence. So now I stay in a cave where I lay Dreaming in rascals writing poems symbols. Hoping to net me, a women who’ll let me. Love her and stir her, kiss her and hug her. And we would fly the magic of sigh Into the lie of a dragons eye |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 ...or are you really Puff, my friend? made of dreams and stuff, no end? Your dragon's lair is here, in blue and Randy's friends surround you, true... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You are shining very bright this morning.    |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're going to be the dragon in the cave at first aren't you? Then you'll turn into a lamb.....I know your ways. This is as cute as they come Sy! A real fun read with some great satirical intent. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome For that answer I can only give you a big and Hug. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah I always wanted to hear about Randy.. You should tell us more! Great morning read Sy love, ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'm smiling now for this is what I already knew ... the truth about the dragon that lives inside of you. I saw thru the smoke and fire a long time ago ... past the heartburn to the desire that is your inner glow. Randy's no monster, that's just a disguise of alibis ... come out of the cave and we'll both be butterflies. ~~~  *winkiewinkie* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress, I'll see what I can do. JM, To this poem I say I cannot resist And I'll come out if you really insist. But you'll have to help me paint my wings This along with some other things. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Yes, you are a butterfly! a mask of task a dream of seem a heart of brave fly from your cave |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, And if I do I'll visit you. LOL |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, I love the internal rhyming all throughout this wonderful poem, this is excellent and could picture the sight of this romantic and loyal dragon you represent! (big hugggssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
nope no bumpkin, me thinks....but innocence?LOL hey stir me you usually do perhaps not in the same way twice, but then who wants the same dish of poi every day?  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (09-08-2002 11:32 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Always enjoy your comments. VAS, Have you ever tasted poi, don't think you would like it. LOL |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah, this reads like a fairytale, it just needs the happy ending where the romantic dragon gets his princess. You can never win or lose |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for letting me in on the real you----Now I'm more confused than ever! hehe Enjoyed the humour---seems you're just as convoluted, I mean, "multi-faceted" as your writing! Have a great day! Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracey Just look in the eye of the Dragon. LOL Earth Angel Aren't we all "convoluted." thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mayhaps we are sheep in wolves clothing? Mayhaps a Monarch soft and delicate sitting on top the dragon's nose.....whispering softly in his ear...telling him it ain't time to eat yet.... Could that be our Sy.... and btw...no smooches for me, OK>>>> |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
No, I've never tasted poe, and don't think I want to, however the other thing I thought of was pablum and that isn't quite what I wanted. Guess I could have used "Cream of Wheat," or oatmeal.  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Perhaps, perhaps. LOL VAS, I think your right on the oatmeal. LOL |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Due to the fact that I simply adore dragons I simply adore your poem..hehe does that work..yes I agree with everyone else.. Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kristen, You could not have said it better. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A fine tribute to that Randy guy, Sy... A dragon in lamb's clothing or a lamb in dragon's clothing...  ~ dragon hugsLyra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart Truly exquisite writing, I love your writing any which way it is served but when you stir in the dragon’s roar, and sprinkle in the touch of butterfly it transmutes into something that is exquisite beyond measure. In touch of mind you fly free On the back of wiles fantasy To frolic in starlight’s glow Simply let your dreamers thoughts flow I’ll gather dews of soft dawn To bathe your soul in early morn If you’ll gift me dragons heart Then show me how the magic starts On wings of light I’ll join you To dance around the pages blue At close of day I’m away To come again another day To stroke your thought just like this Is to receive a magic kiss You have to know I love this utterly utterly love this. Truly exceptional writing from you darling heart  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, Thank you sweet for the dragon hugs. Marsha, It is always a welcome sight to see your replies. Each time you sprinkle a little star dust over me and I am carried off for the moment. Thank you dear and your poetry is superb. |
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