Open Poetry #22 |
Text of Mask (for Mikey challenge) |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Text of mask... hidden in veils of damask. I shall not ask from whence you came, for I have never been lucky at the disguise game; forever showing myself blatently, unable to mask my faults. Seems the face of me cannot hide from reality, and this text of mask alludes me, cavorting capriciously out of reach, laughing at me for not knowing the rules of this game you call hide and seek. For you learned long ago to always peek, thereby finding me... sans mask. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Kacy, I can see you, and the mask. Found -- and discarded. Mikey |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, as I said, you always peek...but thank you, for the heart that sees is the heart that feels. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Kacy, this is wonderful, I love it, your words wear as masks so well here in a game of hide and seek, yay!!! (kiss on cheek) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-07-2002 11:21 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love the play on words with "alludes" (refers indirectly to) as opposed to "eludes" (escapes from) Well done Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Only the brave sans mask you are you did Brava! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Noah, with unmasked thanks! Kethry, you've uncovered my capricious mask! Lady, thank you kindly! Am I exposed now? Mikey, thanks for the inspiration. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-08-2002 08:35 AM).] |
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