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Molten Hearts |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Molten love flowing in a pure hot, heated stream from within the cavern of me. Raging torrent of earth’s blood pouring forth in volcanic flow. Kissing the eyes of you... The touch of you.. Touch me as I whisper softly as my heart, mind and soul become your own...entwined. Lie before my sight, that I might bask in the beauty of you. That I might dream of all that is you...that you are or will ever become... Flickering shadows dance the night of waxen flame, and molten fire. Chilling winds scurry away, as the heat of passion’s winds blow...and take the breath of your sigh... As I trace the lace of you.. As you trace me... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
...As love will trace the lace of forever shores... Lovely write. ThisDiamond |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is an awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Whoah! This is one hot and romantic poem....Wonderful! Write on! Cher Poetry is: |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
A long time since I have read your words Barry ... too long!! You haven't lost your touch, could see the sparks before I even read this one! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, this flows gently and passionately like lava, your words always stream with honesty and voice, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Molten love flowing in a pure hot, heated stream from within the cavern of me." ---Now what exactly, are you referring to?!? teehee! Very erotic! Very sensual! Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-08-2002 12:56 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tracing lace... a most delicate weave... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, What have you been drinking? Whatever it is it's potent brew. Enjoyed. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is warm Barry Great romantic mood.... "Flickering shadows dance the night of waxen flame, and molten fire. Chilling winds scurry away, as the heat of passion’s winds blow...and take the breath of your sigh... As I trace the lace of you.. As you trace me..." Nicely done! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry Very sensual and passionate writing. Enjoyed! |
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