Open Poetry #22 |
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Elias |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Elias walks alone at night, through darkened woods precarious, On needled path 'mid shimmering pines, man-child with gait temarious, As light of heaven's stars above, fall on life's desolation, Elias waits not for the dawn, walks on in isolation, Evening breezes whisper forth, chanting through the trees, Softly calling out his name, in muted repartees, Into the brush a rabbit steals, moving quickly thither, Elias pauses but for an instant, as darkness calls him hither. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Tim...so good to see you! You do night like no other poet I know...into beautiful! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do paint night so well Tim... thank you for popping in... stay awhile, will you? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Tim! Pleased to meet you, and pleased to have read your words. Simply stated, I love this poem. You created the atmosphere so incredibly well, that I felt every emotion you were converying. Love, NIGHT & Laughter Linda |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
oh tis perfectly lovely, of the night. |
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