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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
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now don't laugh.....lol....this is my first and only haiku, and you should have seen how hard it was......rofg....oh well...I am a free verser and I know it, so why I attempt form now and then is beyond me...... silver lining inside of darkness silver shimmers take her eyes back into the light [This message has been edited by jellybeans (08-16-2002 03:49 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No laughing here, some simple appreciation for an art form done very well by your pen and mind...but no laughing...smiling? yes...smiling... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thanks for not laughing *smile* and for your touching comments  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JellyBeaner~ Why attempt a 'form' now ????? How's about because this one is BEAUTIFUL ! AND ... guess what .... they're addictive~  I love it ... and all bets are down that there WILL be another !  Lovely, lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
 Hey! Don't mind me.. I'm a dog!!!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yanno... I really hate people who can do anything and have gorgeous legs to boot. *G* It simply isn't fair to understand both computers and metaphors... that's being greedy with talent that should have been distributed among us lesser folks. *S* And as for those people who can write poems or responses or just about ANYTHING without going on and on and on.... don't they end up with lots of leftover words pouting because they were rejected?? That's cruelty, yanno... to the unused words and those of us who pamper them and type away whether we have anything to say or not. LOL But I am better at one thing... and that's appreciating your work. *S* I like this, lady... lots. *G* (And yeah, I know I could have just said that without all the other, but SOMEONE's gotta be wordy! LOL) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JellyGirl~ Look what Suthern did ! ! ! ! Leftover words pout Because they were rejected That is cruelty Yeah on Suthern !!! Well .... ya' did too !  *Huggers* ~*Meesie*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Iloveit!  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Hey where did my reply go? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Not much for form myself but I really liked this. Great idea! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you all....am please it went over well, and marge...yeppers she is a poet but she just don't know it......rofg... suthern...my how you do go on.......lololol.....love your reply nice haiku Marge pulled out rebel good to see you, thank you duncan, me too...thank you [This message has been edited by jellybeans (08-22-2002 02:14 PM).] |
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