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Peeling Layers (Mask Challenge)
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Peeling Layers (Mask Challenge) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A mask.... Hiding reality from eyes Covering the pain of the past of the life before the mask. A smile overlying guilt covering shame hiding.... Showing only false images of graven feel... A mask of hope buried beneath the soil of one’s heart... Clawing to the air of freedom and life after the mask of forgiveness is worn. Which mask shall be worn upon the face of truth? As eyes stream the water of life before the peel of a new mask is born. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A mask of hope buried beneath the soil of one’s heart... Clawing to the air of freedom and life after the mask of forgiveness is worn. bravo Barry. I for one enjoyed this challenge immensely! You have mastered it well. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Magnus, I like what you did with your mask.  Mike |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Yes indeed, there are many wicked lies to life that can be so inconceivable at first then when we dig underneath it all and discover forgiveness with justice, the truth will always be the final product, a porcelain china mask crystal clear! (big hugggsssssss) This is marvelous, excellent challenge, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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