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The Text of Masks...yep, the challenge
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The Text of Masks...yep, the challenge |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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It's been forever. Sight has not been since time erased the love. Time Tragedy Betrayal All eroded the stone of our bond. Now we simply don't see. When forced side by side, we communicate through the text of masks we wear. I feel you you feel me with fingertips we discover the loss. Yet we continue in a state of unseeing of uncaring without love. WhiteRose "I can't stay on your life support, there's a shortage in the switch"~~Pink |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done! sad...but a great response to the challenge! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Well done and so true Cold hands means a warm heart |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Anne, I can feel the masks falling away with each new poem you type. Mikey |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Yet we continue in a state of unseeing of uncaring without love. powerful writing Anne. Challenge well met!! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Anne, this is so sad but true, sweet friend, I wish for love to always reveal his eyes and face earnestly to you and love you openly without wearing masks of secrets and falsity! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, excellent challenge response, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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