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manana lleveda (morning born) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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that velvet sky, a dark sleet sheet hung over the clothes line in some gods rocky back moult, a silky slough of indigo with black backed lack not to dry there but to wry just an oblique of distraction, from day and night's nude dance of place trades begging for attention on center stage of time splinter irony bloodhorse riders, shape shift seamless through wind's hollow fingers strapped to iron steeds with drifter's chains throttles clenched with poison thirst, faster doesn't hurt as much as the ends morning moves escape through drapes ms sun shows her breasts swollen to feed, ooze of warm for drench less breath, a suffocate of velvet in smother mud blood withdrawn from wind that folds the night, and lays it offended over empty saddled day . ©Dark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Again, again, the imagery leaves the amaze in gaze... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love reading your work ... I never know what you're writing about exactly but that's fine I make my own images up....Great stuff! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You sir, do have the road in you, it colors much of your work. This one no less. "bloodhorse riders, shape shift seamless through wind's hollow fingers strapped to iron steeds with drifter's chains throttles clenched with poison thirst, faster doesn't hurt as much as the ends" In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS The morn is blessed by you in many ways...your eyes clothe, or undress her with your unique vision...always a pleasure to read. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunshine, thanks lady friend with a coffee cup. just a funny morning and some scooter riding flashbacks. Thanks to you huge babe. ethome, lol, thanks my friend, one of those thick wet blood dark fog mornings with wounded clouds seeping and the smell of leather and harley exhaust..kinda. wranx, arrigoto sir..yes a bit of the pave curse does speak through sometimes..I appreciate your reads and perceptions. martie, hi lil neighbor, you bless me with your touches to my misprints. slow hugs to you and a fast tickle. |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
So much imagery here...great stuff. I love dark poetry. I definitely like this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm, the smell of leather and harley exhaust. Yessss...that would do it. Good morning/afternoon/evening.. to you DS. ~slow hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
magi' thanks to you for the review. lady E, thank you lil one for the look and the ride behind. good all day to you too. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, your wonderful words always shine with such depth and motorcycle zen, I love it! (big hugggssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DC, Biennial bifurcation leave hoofs of bigotry. Enjoyed. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
"A silky slough of indigo..." Mmmm. Is that a good thing..? *s* If it isn't, only you could make it still sound like something that should be whispered when dawn is still hours away and there is much left to explore... Indigo |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
"A silky slough of indigo..." Mmmm. Is that a good thing..? *s* If it isn't, only you could make it still sound like something that should be whispered when dawn is still hours away and there is much left to explore... Indigo |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
"a silky slough of indigo..." Mmmm. Is that a good thing? *s* If it isn't, only you know how to make it still sound like something that would be whispered in the hours before dawn when there is so much left to explore... Indigo |
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