Open Poetry #22 |
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Don't Create |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is an unusual poem I wrote while thinking of all the grief in the world today and how still one thing keeps me going; the beauty of love and how no more to me need to be created but this special otherside that exists when all we need is love! Kind of my rebellious, playful side! ![]() Don't Create By: Noah Eaton 9/5/02 All I want to live to see today Are your countryside, your tropical paradise All I wish for everyday Is to live in your pastoral hearty otherside Thousands of dogs starving in the alleys Do people really call this democracy? Children marching like ants, hoisting soles of labor Carrying Nike and corporations to toadstools they call timocracy Jesters flooding the gardens like locusts Chewing all the fat of the rations And here I am listening to this all It's none of my business... All I want to live to see today Are your countryside, your tropical paradise All I wish for everyday Is to live in your pastoral hearty otherside These hands that built these temples These feet that have climbed the chapels Will have nothing to do With this foreign bureaucracy Wolf packs tearing at the "just" in justice Like Assyrians in phalanx formations Lying in our graves, digging for diamonds Stolen from our forefathers, stripped of their gauntlets The population grows and there's a new argument forming every five seconds Don't make this worse than it already is Don't create, I beseech you... As I stand and strum this bleeding guitar All I want to live to see today Are your countryside, your tropical paradise All I wish for everyday Is to live in your pastoral hearty otherside These ears that've heard like a dolphin This voice that bellows like a lion Will have nothing to do With this foreign bureaucracy... I don't relate to tarot readings I don't believe to Karl Marx Ben Jonson says "It is not growing like a tree!" Where do these roots tear down at the bark? You are my auguries of innocence You are my melting pot of everything pleasant The papparazzi that watches my every move My Dome of the Rock, how I got back my groove A flag to my nation A train at every station My parchent, my recitation It's impossible to explain it... All I want to live to see today Are your countryside, your tropical paradise All I wish for everyday Is to live in your pastoral hearty otherside "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Noah, you are so young and passionate still. I hope you never lose that. |
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Krishankins![]()
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I hope you are turning this into a song, Noah. It would go PLATINUM!!!! Wonderful as usual!! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow. Sing it out loud and clear, so that many will hear.. "Thousands of dogs starving in the alleys Do people really call this democracy? Children marching like ants, hoisting soles of labor Carrying Nike and corporations to toadstools they call timocracy Jesters flooding the gardens like locusts Chewing all the fat of the rations And here I am listening to this all It's none of my business..." But thank goodness YOU DO make it your business, Noah. I enjoyed reading this 'otherside' of the Mistletoe Angel, your 'playful' side...your biting, gutwrenchingly honest social commentary. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Agree with Midnitesun: your 'playful' side...your biting, gutwrenchingly honest social commentary. especially his last line's summation of this piece well done, Noah! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice expression Noah...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very well done, Noah... Thanks for sharing your thoughts ... Regards, sudhir |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Noah: This was topic larger than the world itself condensed in a lengend and expressed in a teardrop. Good thoughts. ThisDiamond |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Wonderful, Wonderful, Wonderful!! Hugs, Marti |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I have the same rebellious streak, Noah. I love this. Sandra |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Keep on keepin' on my friend ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bravo our dear Noah !!! Well done. hugs, Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There are two sides to every coin. I like this side of you as well! Linda |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
every side of you is a young poetic talent singing out to us all! ![]() |
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