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CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-09-05 11:23 PM

The scattered mists
Of a thousand dreams.
That look in your eyes
that sparked with gleams.
Ethereal fog
Of a shattered mind,
That deep spot within me
You had to find.
My beating heart;
Beating like drums,
electric sounds beat
Within my veins thrums.
The unknown places
Of a body untouched,
Soon to be discovered
With your exploring touch.
Hearts beating wild
And feeling so free,
This heat of passion
Between you and me.
Internal fires,
So truly they flame;
To these burning fires
I give only one name:
Love.....

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (09-06-2002 02:57 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-05 11:29 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! As all love poems do this reminded me of my Joanna, who I always love writing poems for! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love youn so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-09-05 11:33 PM

...Beautiful!!...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-09-05 11:38 PM

...and "Love" is what you conveyed so well with this poem!

Linda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-09-06 05:48 AM

Wow this is good...James

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

5 posted 2002-09-06 02:59 PM

Thanks so much to all of you for responding and commenting. I am apologetic that it takes me so long to get the time for responding to your kindnesses. hugs to all. Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-09-06 04:25 PM

A very passionate poem ... and yes, they
all are driven by love and become part of
love...each feeds the other...that is how I
feel about it...

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

7 posted 2002-09-06 04:29 PM

oh I quite agree, Barry. Thanks for your gracious comment and your encouraging words.
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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