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MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

0 posted 2002-09-05 07:28 PM

I’ll hang you on a thread of my own life
Wrap you with my own tormented memories
And when all is said and done
I’ll set you free within my own breath
And when you come again with the next
Inhaling breath
I’ll tuck you in
Hide you within me
And profess of the falling
Of the distance they say
It would always be

Crash the moment, sir
Like fragments of glass
Wipe them out
As if they’d never be
And when they hold me in their misery
Claim them
As if you always know
The right way of letting go
Letting go
Of memories within my arteries
Of words that build themselves
Out of my own cells
And when visions blur themselves
Out of me
Bring them back
To where they’d always be

I’ll hang you on a thread of my own life
If you only know
that this life
Has nothing better to show

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Thank you

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-05 07:40 PM

(sigh) This is sooooooo beautifully woven, sweet friend, always hang your precious memories on the clothesline of your heart and make a tapestry of them all! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2002-09-05 07:45 PM

Hi Melody

So nice to read you here again. This is lovely.
Sandra

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2002-09-05 10:08 PM

WOW! Oh yes, you wove this well. Enjoyed

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2002-09-06 09:14 AM

Dear Noah

Thank you dearest for your ever sweet words
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sandra
It's so sweet to see you again and be with you...I missed you all

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

White Rose

Thank you for reading it.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2002-09-15 06:36 PM

My Melody... much to catch up on & many notes to compare... As always, this poem is an internal breeze of many scents, some almost forgotten... Good to read you again.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

6 posted 2002-09-16 08:16 AM

It is good to know that your songs have not stopped my friend.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2002-09-16 08:45 AM

The complete intermingling of two bodies such as you have described so well, is a very sensual read. Like--WOW!

~ smiles ~
Earthy Angel

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2002-09-22 11:29 PM

I'm glad that I didn't miss this. . . it's wonderful my friend. . .

good to see you again my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tommysgirl03
Junior Member

since 2002-09-21

Posts 35

9 posted 2002-09-22 11:32 PM

This is such an awesome write. Full of sweet words and honesty. Well done.

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
Member

since 2002-09-20

Posts 155
Fraggle Rock

10 posted 2002-09-23 12:21 PM

I must agree, you wove this so wonderfully! I don't know whatelse to say..but *sigh* Enjoyed very much...

Consider yourself fuzzed

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2002-09-23 01:15 AM

And what an enchanting melody this poem is! Very, very nice.

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