Open Poetry #22 |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Was it ever there Was it all a joke Played on my heart To take what you needed To make you feel special Was there any realness To your “love” A piece of sincerity In an insincere bonding You say you hurt But the hurt never showed You say you cry But the tears never flowed Maybe you’ll care When you look back and realize that the need you seek Was here, all along Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As the saying goes,"Sometimes you don't appreciate someone, until they're gone." --This may well apply to her! Very moving piece of writing. Linda |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
How true. I have felt this way...and Earth Angel is right... some people are never appreciated for how special you are till they are gone. If it is any consolation, anyone who doesn't love you, see you for the irreplaceible, special person you are does not deserve your efforts. Don't waste your time and energy looking back. Lots of getting over it healing (((hugs))) Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (09-05-2002 12:22 PM).] |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interesting write. Sometimes one doesn't miss the well 'til it goes dry ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A piece of sincerity In an insincere bonding Yes, sometimes it takes losing what we needed to realize we needed it. Nicely done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Waving a hand across the border from Windsor and saying, Great Write!! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Why thank you neighbor! The one thing that can be said about pain is that we usually turn it around and learn from it. It sometimes takes more time than is comfortable...but in the end the lesson is worth it! God Bless you all and thank you for the kind words! Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definately a great truth here...I enjoyed this |
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