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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-08-16 07:24 AM


Dark lady,
Dressed in black silently stands,
Watching he
Who once was
Beside her holding her hands.
Without cause
He is gone
From their house and from her life,
Living done
Randomly
Made a widow from a wife,
Dark lady
She still tries to understand.

Gloom


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-16 10:51 AM



I wear black as a common every day part of my attire...this causes me to wonder what transformation I may go through, if and when...

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-08-16 10:31 PM


You know it's funny (strange)  I was  just thinking today while driving..how my mother was widowed..and is alone..and  how much  I will be like her when divorced..almost the same as a death to me...only  mom doesn't care for  black as much as I do.

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M  

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By the sea
3 posted 2002-08-17 06:34 PM


I like the color black and often wear it myself, although as an artist, it is not a color I use.    
Kethry
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4 posted 2002-08-17 07:09 PM


your black thoughts reflect so well the gloom of grief.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



CocoBaci
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5 posted 2002-09-24 11:12 AM


A touching write MM...
Smiles2uPoetFriend...
*~coco~*

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