Open Poetry #22 |
Popsicles of grape..... (Senyru) |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Popsicles of grape And strawberry cotton candy --Sweet tastes of summer [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-04-2002 01:32 PM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Maybe sweet scents...but these enliven my tongue more than my nose. Great poem! I think you'd call this one a senyru since it's not about nature. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
VAS---What would I do without you! I stand corrected. Thanks again. I'll make the edit! I hope you're not going to start charging me for all the wonderful advice and guidance you give me! Linda |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Earth Angel, My grandson loves grape popsicicles. Juanita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
VAS--I just reread your reply---and darned if you're not right---again! Of course, the tongue would be the sense organ most affected, so I'm replacing "scents" with "tastes"----There now, that's much better! Keep dropping by!----P-l-e-a-s-e!! Linda |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
*mmmmm...licking my lips*.. as I finish reading this little tongue tickler. Are you trying to make me fatter? I have a sudden urge to eat grape popsicles for lunch!!Wonderful as always Linda! Tammy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tammy---I love your "sweet" replies! BTW, popsicles are only about 70 calories for a whole one, and 35 for a half----and if they're made with aspartaine---only about 5 calories each! So feel free to have one for lunch---guilt free! Linda |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
sounds like lots of fun could it be the county fair my taste buds don't care Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A delicious little poem The White Rose~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Interloper---I enjoyed your 'senyruic' (???) reply. I'm honoured to have a poem written for me by the illustrious, Dr. Love (Gawd! I hope that's your nickname---I've been getting a few things screwed up lately!) Lots of Laughter Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
WhiteRose---and that was a delicious little reply! Thank you! Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
kettle corn poppin' and don't forget to halt for the ice cream truck man YAY!!! Mmmmmmmm...you are making me hungry, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge is gonna love this. Grape, her favorite!!! Ahhhh, summer. Marti |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah---what a wonderful senyruic reply. I love it. Thank you so much, dear heart! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti---could you go and find Marge for me? Tell her I'll share my last grape popsicle with her! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
North Carolina Girl---Sorry I missed your reply---I just now noticed it. Since your grandson loves grape popsicles, I'll split my last one between him and Marge! Linda |
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