Open Poetry #22 |
Drawn Soft by Your Soul (re-posted for Kacy) |
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
~Drawn Soft by Your Soul~Lyra |
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Blue Kitty Member
since 2002-08-05
Posts 72Virginia |
Wasn’t sure I was going to like this, but it turns out nice, so that’s good. The poem’s goodly done even if it hadn’t turned nice and positive. I didn’t see it befor so it’s new to me and I like it. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Bk... I'm glad that you enjoyed it... ~ hugs from a rodent of a different stripe Lyra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lyra, you've only written the truth ... and so beautifully Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Great work....I enjoyed this very much. DeaDiAmore |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lyra~How very very true this is! Well done sweet lady. ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too think that poetry can be analyzed but should never be criticized and it hurts me to see ones own personal thoughts always attacked like mine used to! (sigh) Yes Kacy, follow her advice for you truly are special and deserve so much respect as I truly think you have amazing talent, we all love you both so much, God Bless You! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Lyra and Kacy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-03-2002 05:01 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
These cut and bled words, wrapped in bandages of soft verse. Awesome, Lyra. Mike |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Dr. Love... Are you a psychiatrist> ~ hugs and love for the doc Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Dea... I'm glad you enjoyed... ~ lots of hugs Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Definitely true, Nancy... Self esteem is so very important. ~ esteemed hugs Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Noah... thanks so much for your reply... I don't think there is anything wrong with criticizing a poem, as long as it isn't done maliciously... afterall, how otherwise would we learn to write it. Its just that some people criticize the poet and not the poem... and that is really nasty. This poem is really about a woman's self esteem and how parents have to be really careful about saying negative things to their daughters about their appearences... but you are right that it can be applied to poetry also... Thanks so much... ~ loving hugs Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Mr.Squirrel, I love the way you stated that. Even your replies are poetic. ~ furry rodent hugs Lyra |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Wow, Lyra! love the style you used here. It's the message that hurts...the missles used to bring people down in building up a fragile and hurtful ego. My step-father laid the whipping-words on my back many times. The scars never heal, although i still call him father. jeff |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Lyra ~~ You are some powerful writer!!! Words are so powerful and can hurt so very much when they are used to attack. And that attack can be so painful. There is nothing worse than writing something from the heart and having someone tear it to shreds maliciously. Thank you for writing this. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Lyra...Very enjoyable. At first I thought this was about people lashing out in anger at each other saying things they regreted later. Like one time 2 people very close to me were having a falling out and I was trying to be the peace keeper, I told them not to use words as weapons, because they leave scars on the heart that sometime never heal...Thanks for sharing...Paul |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you so much for sharing this one Lyra. Your heart always beats gently, and with understanding. Yes, we must all be careful how we use words, for once out there in the open, you can never take them back. |
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