Open Poetry #22 |
spiderlace |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Tonight you write and I will dream the endings cut and tendrilling silken threads of spiderlace feathering my empty place inside of me becoming nest-- tonight? you write. I'll dream the rest. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
that's not fair need your boughs of willowweep to sleep under serene and blue azure hue -- you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, no! You can't stop there! Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Okay ... that's it ! I don't believe you'll find, but perhaps one other incident, where I copied in order to quote the entire poem piece~ SO ... guess you'd be right in assuming that I kind of LIKED everything about this write~ 'Tonight you write and I will dream the endings cut and tendrilling silken threads of spiderlace feathering my empty place inside of me becoming nest-- tonight? you write. I'll dream the rest.' Off to dream~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH yes, this has a quality to it that certainly fits the title... As only you could write...and dream... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Spider Lady spin your web ever fancy fullsome bed draw me in draw me near Spider Lady nest so sheer [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-02-2002 03:05 PM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
an amazing feel to this an inspiring idea to think of spider weaving to help connect the empty places to the whole Sunshine, when I meet the spider that had the brains to weave that lace, I'm evacuating the place for sure! It's beautiful, it's awesome, but to think of an 8 legged creature capable of such without crochet needles would frighten me to death. Something like when computers become smarter than those that created them. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Dreaming of lace and spidery face and beauty of web woven by those eight legs Just keep on dreaming, Karen... I hope this is a good spider and not a scary one... Your poem is lovely and inspiring... ~ dreamy hugs Lyra |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I wish I could write like this. Amazing.. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
words and dreams. . . the weaving of life. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Karen, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, this is intricately woven with a web of fine magic, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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