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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-09-02 01:12 AM

Tonight
you write
and I will dream
the endings
cut
and tendrilling
silken threads
of spiderlace
feathering
my empty place
inside of me
becoming nest--
tonight?
you write.

I'll dream the rest.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

1 posted 2002-09-02 01:25 AM

that's not fair
need your
boughs
of willowweep
to sleep
under

serene
and
blue
azure hue --
you

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-02 01:35 AM

Oh, no! You can't stop there!

Linda

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-09-02 02:56 PM

Serenity~
Okay ... that's it !
I don't believe you'll find, but perhaps one other incident, where I copied in order to quote the entire poem piece~

SO ... guess you'd be right in assuming that I kind of LIKED everything about this write~

'Tonight
you write
and I will dream
the endings
cut
and tendrilling
silken threads
of spiderlace
feathering
my empty place
inside of me
becoming nest--
tonight?
you write.

I'll dream the rest.'

Off to dream~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-09-02 03:00 PM

OH yes, this has a quality to it that
certainly fits the title... As only you
could write...and dream...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-09-02 03:03 PM

Spider Lady
spin your web
ever fancy
fullsome bed
draw me in
draw me near
Spider Lady
nest so sheer

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-02-2002 03:05 PM).]

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2002-09-02 03:09 PM

an amazing feel to this
an inspiring idea to think of spider weaving to help connect the empty places to the whole

Sunshine, when I meet the spider that had the brains to weave that lace, I'm evacuating the place for sure! It's beautiful, it's awesome, but to think of an 8 legged creature capable of such without crochet needles would frighten me to death. Something like when computers become smarter than those that created them.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-09-02 03:14 PM

Dreaming of lace
and spidery face
and beauty of web
woven by those eight legs

Just keep on dreaming, Karen...
I hope this is a good spider and not a scary one...
Your poem is lovely and inspiring...

~ dreamy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-09-02 06:23 PM

I wish I could write like this.
Amazing..
Sandra

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2002-09-02 09:15 PM

words and dreams. . . the weaving of life. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-09-02 10:20 PM

(smiles) Oh Karen, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, this is intricately woven with a web of fine magic, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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