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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2002-09-01 11:30 PM

It's not for me to say
(or know ?)
why you chose to go.

The silence is deafening.
The air is still.

Even music has lost
it's usual thrill.

Food tastes flat,
without your spice of life.

But I can wait.
I have not shut the gate,
on Love.
Have you?

Did we pass through
this ethereal entrance
too late?

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-09-01 11:32 PM

Very nice. I love the use of "ethereal". It's a word that isn't used much, but is very powerful.
Nicely done!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2002-09-01 11:32 PM

Hello Kacy

This was so sad, yet there still seemed to be some hope at the end. If this is written from a personal experience I hope the color returns to your life soon.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-09-01 11:43 PM

Thanks, Kris! I love that word too. When I say it outloud, it transports me to another realm.

Sue, I'm OK. I guess it is from personal experience, yet I do remain constantly hopeful. It is my basic nature to look for the silver lining within the darkest corners. but I never knew that about myself until I began to 'release' the real me.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-02 12:02 PM

(smiles) Oh Kacy, this is so sad but hopeful, sweet friend, know the gate will open for you and love will always seep through! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2002-09-02 12:29 PM

The silence is deafening.
The air is still.

Even music has lost
it's usual thrill.

Food tastes flat,
without your spice of life.

Yep, understand this midnight write. Is how I finally learned to spell 'compromise'.
When nothing's the same or as good, without someone...amazing what bending a bit can do.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-09-02 01:09 AM

OK, I understand the concept of pretzel.

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