Open Poetry #22 |
On Winged Flight |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Before the bell’s soft brassy ring at sleep of dawn from curtains drawn. Idle minds take to wandering upon the trek of dew drop's lawn. But for the burn of candle’s flick wherein the vision came to pen as passions brought from eyes the wick of burn to yearn the wants of sin. Through tireless days of waking light where shadows danced in pleasant veil when once they shared a soulful flight on wings of air in flowing trail. The highest peak of lofted hay became the thatch of two entwined as dusty shimmers sparkling played beneath the glowing moonbeam’s shine. As hearts then beat in rhythm free in search the red of flowing rose. Two now become one destiny wherein the minds in dream are chose to nest as one the tallest tree and find the red of flowing rose. [This message has been edited by Magnus (09-01-2002 10:12 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite and softly sensual Barry! Good to be back and reading you again. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Good to have you back, gracing these pages with your enchanting magic... Did you leave the W.S. behind? You know that is my fave? Don't you dare ever run out!!!! I'll have to have some expressed to you... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry The dreams you dream are beautiful like river's flow on a lazy summer night you play within the sweet scent of hay Enjoyed! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Martie, but you know what? Yuh really have to be careful in hay... cause it sometimes sticks ya every now and then...OUCH!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That does it! That absolutely does it! The next man in life is going to be a poet! Enough with all those left-brained scientific types who don't know a rose from their nose! Ha! Ha! Mind you, they make lots of money!---Ah, who needs it! I make my own! Yep, a poet would do just fine! It's about time I got a poem written for me instead of me doing all the writing ! In all fairness though, I have received poems of love. For example: Roses are red Violets are blue Linda is sweet She tastes like champagne (Hope he doesn't visit this site---Nah! Not a chance!) Enjoyed YOUR love poem! Linda |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Stunning images from the most romantic of souls. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Barry, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it, as always your poetry always grows wings and soars with such heart and sincerity! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! This is outstanding, dear Barry. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Linda (Earth Angel) When morn does come through window nigh and brings to birth the gleam of eye. As whispers fall upon the ears to bring to heart soft flowing tears. Where but the dawn of new born day should one be found in loving sway. Before the rise of sun to shine.. One love of thee, one love of thine. The pen and quill from ink to word shall fly the night on winged bird till morn again removes the night A poet sits, in thought and write. Thanx Linda...Pleased you enjoyed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - warmness from a gentle soft heart in these words. You search deep and write them very well... BC |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Barry... Is This Magic?...Yeah, I really think so. Could you spread a little my way ? Great reading !!! Kitty * That which gives light, must endure burning * |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now, Magnus, you knew I'd have to reply to your reply! That beautiful poem of love and tenderness should last me awile! I'll read it every night before I go to bed---after I slap some cream on my face and grab my Teddy-----bear, that is! Now that's a pretty picture! Thank you so very much! Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Barry, a beautiful write and I loved the rhyme Maree. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
An inspiring write. Well done. ThisDiamond |
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