Open Poetry #22 |
Now Time Has Come |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Now time has come Between you and me So what are we waiting for? When time has come Let Us try to love again We cry to forget all about it Now time has come To proove our last chance to love Now time has come to Take the chance away Now time has come to making love again A brand new day To wash away All the pouring rain Let the days come To shine again When already so much has taken away By the time The time had it's own way And now time has come today to bring us all new and few showers To our hearts Time has it's own way When love has to make each new day Now time has come to make it's own day Now time has It so many reasons and shinning it's light to the seasons that changes within the time Time has come to take heart away [This message has been edited by vandana (09-01-2002 10:45 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Watch out Vandana, this one is really starting to get the message across very strongly....GOOD word usage....keep goin' Barry |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, the time has come---and you're well on your way as a poet! Well done, Vandana! Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - very nice writing, I like it. A strong message said... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, every poem you keep blossoming as a wonderful poet, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, may time offer loves true joy to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
time waits. . . does love?? well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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