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Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

0 posted 2002-09-01 08:04 PM

I have seen the rest of my life.
It wraps around me for a moment,
Showing me a piece of who I will be.
It comes to me when I watch birds flying;
When I walk past antiquated shops and strangers.
I feel it in the sunset while I drive,
And in the crunch of leaves under the soles of my feet.
It's a tomorrow that forever waits for me,
Beckoning me to come.
And I acquisitively strive towards it,
To the claim of being One.

"See, no one loves..." - Prayers for Rain

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-01 09:28 PM

I feel the emotion

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

2 posted 2002-09-01 09:29 PM

Oh yea.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-09-01 09:35 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Alice, this is such a true and wonderful thought, sweet friend, I know and feel this concept so well myself, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alice, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-01 09:37 PM

a titillating piece, for certain

I'm curious as to the entity of the One you mean, like one with something or someone or One as a whole person, fully who you were created for.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Maverick Wolf
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 94
Scandia, MN

5 posted 2002-09-08 12:12 PM

The peace and serenity that we all seek will come, all in good time. May God's grace shine upon you in all that you do, and remember to smile every now and then.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-09-08 12:23 PM

This is good

Cold hands means a warm heart

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-09-08 10:33 PM

Very nice write.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2002-10-17 06:43 PM

Alice,
I like this piece and the way it pulls one into tomorrow. Sorry...no critique. I'm not qualified to tear into poems.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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