Your Tide (inspired by a bill charles comment)

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #22

Your Tide (inspired by a bill charles comment)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-01 07:01 PM

Your Tide

gentle is
your heart
in swell
where you begin
and I end
I can’t tell
with you
I am
a tide
in spill
whispers
on skin
such a
warm chill
there
time is
held
at bay
it just
suddenly
stops
and there
I shall stay

maggie
Junior Member

since 2002-08-30

Posts 15

1 posted 2002-09-01 07:03 PM

Thats real nice. I love your poem. Simple and straight to the point!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-09-01 08:36 PM

helen - words well thought and said...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-09-01 08:40 PM

(smiles) Oh Helen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I can tell Bill really loves this and you always make such gentle waves with your words! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.