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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-06-11 04:27 PM

Love Shack Sweetheart

As we entered the love shack
I took my sweetheart into my arms
and I knew there was no turning back
when she turned on all her charms.

Our lips blended together
and dried up every tear.
Her kisses seduced me
and melted away my fears.

Later that night in the love shack
I knew everything would be allright
when she told me how much she loved me
as she softly kissed me goodnight.

JamesLee
June11
2002

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

1 posted 2002-06-11 04:53 PM

Awwwwww... this is such a lovely love poem.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-06-11 05:13 PM

A softly sweet and lovely bit of romantic, James....
thanks for sharing.

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2002-06-11 05:26 PM

Alright James! Lovely poem with such flowing romantic emotion!

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

4 posted 2002-06-11 05:54 PM

Whew! Romance is in the air! Love it, love it love it!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2002-06-11 07:38 PM

Hello James

Your words of love and romance would sweep any lady off her feet. Beautifully written.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-06-17 06:58 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you and your love forever find smiles to go around in your Love Shack forever of your dreams! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2002-06-17 07:26 PM

James darling boy NOW this is utterly utterly outstanding writing. Sooooooo beautifully written, I love it. Truly outstanding writing. I love it when you write this well you suit being in love James you really do. This is perfect.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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