Open Poetry #21 |
metal leather |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you are new metal sounds machined smooth with polish saliva I taste the ball bearings of your slide skin gearing you smile at me wicked eyed with your ears plugged to keep the noise of our whispers from touching more then just skin you say my leather hurts you there and that your soul leaks cry salt when I put you against me with your inside outside you beg for crave slavery and handcuffs without keyholes I bring you mirrors full of my face wanting to watch you cover my eyes with wet hand gloves ©Dark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's 94 degrees outside and stormy...and 110 degrees inside and thundering... yikes.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love how you take a typical object and make it seem so new and phenominal that only your wonderful surreal art can do! (sigh) This is absolutely splendid, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-28-2002 12:20 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~If I were to try and speak right now.. a trail of gibberish would come forth.. therefore I shall sit here and drool on my keyboard!! DANG you're good! ~Evening hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
you smile at me wicked eyed with your ears plugged to keep the noise of our whispers from touching more then just skin You always do that. You always touch the reader beyond..just skin. Have I told you lately that your mind..is gorgeous? Sincerely, Reg |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wet, very. Cor |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hmmm........ mmmmm........ drool......... no words hon, just lotsa thoughts and maybe one or two memories from some really cool stories.....*wink* Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady E, thanks hon for the sweet whispers Regina, thank you for the read babe, you like my mind? you may be in trouble now then..(grin) Cor, thanks babe for the read and for the tickle GS, just some close ups Donna...thanks for peeking in |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
you are jessie james customized poetry metal words bent, curved and hammered by hand some flame-lick painted, others dipped in chrome leaving them jaw-dropped as you ride by. Can feel that wind in my hair, DS... *s* Indigo |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Now *this* is a yummy li'l specimen. More people should write poems of such themes. "Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"you smile at me wicked eyed with your ears plugged to keep the noise of our whispers from touching more then just skin" this sparked me. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
you smile at me wicked eyed with your ears plugged We hear what we want to hear, or so I've been told...Lord knows I try~ That little line spoke volumes, and is my cross to bear. Nice write DS~ |
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