Open Poetry #21 |
A Kiss Goodnight |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
To my little girl, Josie Nichole. I miss you sweetie. I love you most!! Daddy Heaven hopes beyond the moon For love to cross the stars Sending you the sweetest dreams No matter where you are your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Yr really good at these, Kris. Yr poems are like breaths -- life-giving and small in equal amounts. So yeh, enjoy yr words. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Smooth as silk...James |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Short and sweet. Wonderful!!!! Love, Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
i can never say how good these replies make me feel about writing. thanks guys Kris your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
God, I can relate here. Must be soo hard to be away from her...don't worry I am sure she knows her daddy loves her....and she is lucky to have you!.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As you will see, I appreciate short and sweet. That certainly describes your work. Well done. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Beautiful... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I can't begin to tell you how refreshing it is to see a "faithful" daddy!!! This is an exceptional piece Kris... *I know she knows* ~Hugs between the miles for you and your little girl* ML Devina Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thoughtful snippets...and I'll bet you're full of them... keep sharing, doling them out, one by one... can't keep them to yourself, you know... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* Beautiful!!!! Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know deep down Josie is always thinking of you and will always love you! (smiles) These short poems are beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kris, You know how to break my heart. What an awesome write. I hope all is well. Peace and comfort to you. Show you care to those you love...today. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful. *S* |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Kris, Tender thoughts in so few words...appreciate your sharing..stuff like this always gets me to ask why we're here. Martin |
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